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  • understand

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    I couldn't help but be a little upset with the lack of updates
    But because I know mibba can be a little screwy
    I went to check on this story
    And I aparently missed everything >.>
    dhdjskxnfkfkfkfo
    May 1st, 2011 at 06:20pm
  • Sucks For You

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    So, I'm pretty sure this is the best story I've read, ever.
    Your writing style is so unique.
    The first few chapters were really confusing, but then as I kept reading things started falling into place, and I was like "oh! now I get it!" lol.
    Anyways, this really is amazing. I love the fact that this story is 100 percent original, and how even when I tried to guess what was gonna happen next, I couldn't figure it out.
    Annnnyways, I'm going to shut up now. Heehee. :3
    March 30th, 2011 at 06:33am
  • boyking

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    Everything about the last chapter was perfect, I could just shit and ramble all over the place about how I liked how he went back to Lewis' house in the end, it was just a good and relevant way to end everything. I basically said everything I wanted to in my last comment but I'll say one more time (and for the last time for this story) how throughout this story your writing never failed to amaze me and I never knew what to expect, but somehow it always made sense in some twisted, fucked up way. Noel was lovely, Lewis was lovely, you're lovely and this talent with words you seem to have will take you far.
    March 13th, 2011 at 04:36am
  • Storm Sparks.

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    Noel you crazy, amazing bastard. But this isn't finishing is it?!
    March 10th, 2011 at 06:20pm
  • understand

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    Does this this mean they're REALLY going to die?
    Dreams do come true <3
    March 8th, 2011 at 12:16pm
  • hideaway;

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    I don't know what to do with myself after I read a chapter of this story. I just sit there and soak it all in. It's amazing really. And addictive. I sit in my classes and wait five minutes for my phone to load the page just to read the next chapter.
    March 5th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • Storm Sparks.

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    Wow. Just wow. Lewis, you poor thing.
    March 4th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • understand

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    so close
    Lewis, you pussy.
    March 4th, 2011 at 11:57am
  • boyking

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    What the shit. I just, I love this story. I wish I could translate it better, but I can't. Looking back at the first chapter, I had no idea that Noel would progress into how he is now, but I like it. I think it's really interesting, and just... ugh. I don't even know. Seeing things from Lewis' point of view was insane, but I loved it. I think it was one of my favourite chapters so far. I can't believe that this is almost over, too. I'm rambling, I know. I can't stop. This was just a really really (really) lovely update. These conversations they have are so... intense. That's a dumb word for it, but whatever. Okay. I love you for even coming up with this, I don't where you got the idea for any of this, but you're truly a talented writer.
    March 4th, 2011 at 06:44am
  • RyderAren

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    Oh my fucking god.
    I am in love with this story.
    Like, legit.
    He's so violent and such an asshole...
    and I just love it. I don't like those sweet stories as much.
    Bahaha.
    I guess I just get some cruel kind of humor out of this. But I love it all the same~ <3
    March 4th, 2011 at 02:43am
  • Bumblebee Brie

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    Geez. O:

    MUST HE KILL ME WITH HIS HOMOCIDAL THOUGHTS? THEY DO KILL ME. ><
    March 1st, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • Storm Sparks.

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    That was my favourite chapter. I seriously have no clue why, though.
    March 1st, 2011 at 08:27pm
  • The Woman

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    This story is beautifully written, I love the way in which you're writing this, it just fits so well (:
    For the past couple of chapters there've been a couple of songs running though my head, they just seem to fit. Violence and Skinny by Pegasus Bridge, they just fit with this story spookily well :'D
    March 1st, 2011 at 08:07am
  • boyking

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    I enjoyed reading it, I mean shit. Wow, these last two chapters have been so intense and they're so insanely good and I don't know what to do with myself. This is amazing.
    March 1st, 2011 at 07:51am
  • isles and glaciers

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    o.o
    This is all.
    March 1st, 2011 at 04:04am
  • understand

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    THAT'S RIGHT HE PROMISED ON HIS LIFE.

    my love for noel's savage side grows stronger with each chapter <3
    March 1st, 2011 at 02:39am
  • Bumblebee Brie

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    This is good. I'll tell you how good. Very good. :]

    It's is so hard for me to write sentences that are this pretty. Every sentence, every word in every chapter lives and dies for a purpose. I say the word in my mind, the word lives. You give me another word, the word dies, and it's a flow. Your flow is so wonderful, I want to read it all. I can't of course, because I would cry endlessly, but that's my way of things.

    I read maybe five chapters. I want more. I'll be checking in-- poets eyes thrive on your work. <3
    March 1st, 2011 at 01:52am
  • understand

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    i've found that i've been wanting more and more for Noel to kill Lewis
    and then commit suicide.
    this story turns me twisted.
    February 28th, 2011 at 10:14pm
  • The Way

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    So I just found this and loved the summary, and when I saw the layout, loved it too. It may take a while to read, but I think it'll be amazing.
    February 19th, 2011 at 04:41am
  • boyking

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    I'm so fucking happy this is back. Lewis doesn't get it. I'm pretty that way. I loved that line, and I can't wait for the next update.
    February 19th, 2011 at 03:37am