Scream From the Pleasure - Comments

are u ever gonna udate this lil slice o' happy?

Update please it's a good story...
I'm glad to have come by it....

Now that I think about it maybe it is 'mind as well'. I don't know really....I am too transfixed by how fucking sweet and just loving Brian already is :D.

I do not know if this is an error or not but: "And you mind as well have..." sounds like it should be 'might as well'.

Beautiful chapter :). I understand where Jessica's hesitation would be but seriously? A relationship with Brian? Who the fuck would pass that shit up? I agree with the chick above me. Just jump him. Just jump him. Update soon <3333.

they are so cute =)

When I read that I was like, "RUN, GO FOR IT, BURST THROUGH HIS DOOR AND JUMP HIM" ^^

I love that story, keep going =D

gimmie moooore! :D

Such a great chapter! I'm so glad that he makes her happy. She deserves it.
So funny that she was oblivious the whole time, ah I can't wait until they get together! More soon :)

Love it, please keep posting more:D

This was just...yowza.
Brian is perfection in every sense of the word and I am in dire need of some updates!! : )

Brian is so sweet....he's like....just...perfect

This chapter was so great! I love how he helped her, he was amazing and so sweet :)
Seriously, the man put on her favorite music and got her favorite ice cream treat, I wish real guys were like that xD
Can't wait for more! I see sparks from these two! :)

I just found this story and it is flippin awesome. I love it and can't wait for more. Paul is a a-hole. They haven't been apart a week yet and he's with his ex? She was right to call from the wedding and leave him. I think her and Brian would be cute together.

Jess, this chapter was awesome. I really loved Brian's personality in this. Yet again, he proves what a sweetheart he is; not only by coming to her aide and being her shoulder to cry on, but by apologizing somewhat yet again for the eye. And he bought her ice cream, which is going to make any female melt. It was an amazing update, and I really can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Happy New Year! I like this chapter, she's smiling for real yay.

That was such a cute chapter. I think you could have added a bit more emotion at both the start and the end to really show the contrast of how she was feeling and also to prove that Brian really made her feel a lot better. But otherwise, it was good and it's obviously the start of something between them, as more than friends, so I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted :)

I love you for using my brother's name and actually making him a douche cause he is one.
Paul is a douche-bag. Just saying. :)
Love the story!

i just read all of this and i loved it! update soon please!

That beginning caught me offguard! Haha I totally thought it was actually happening, oh my Brian's dreams lol I loved it! Can't wait for more :)

Oh, and you posted the last chapter twice!

It was a nice chapter. That's really all I have to say lol. It was nice to see Jimmy and Bri's relationship, as well as Zacky with his baseball, and the girls' relationship.
But to me, it was just nice, if you get what I mean? Better than okay, but not an amazing chapter. But then again, it could just be a filler chapter - we all have those. It'll be interesting to see what happens next chapter.