Scream From the Pleasure - Comments

You got my personality pretty much spot on. I could definitely see myself saying something like that if my friends were treated like that. XD For some reason, Zacky made me laugh in this one. XD And how everyone treated Johnny with his little quote. That was pure genius. I can't wait til the next update.

Amazing update! :) It was a nice read. :D I love all the characters, they are all very realistic and not bland at all. :) Great job at making Kayla kick ass. ;) She's a pretty nifty lass. :)

Also, Matt's dimples... as soon as you mentioned them in this chapter... I just...

I just started reading this, glad I found it, I like it! I can't wait to read more :)

Yay! Things are gonna get real interesting real quick! I really can't wait to see what happens when they first meet again. I wonder if Jimmy will scare her... Lol great chapter :)

hey! there you are! you finally show up

That was pure genius, Jess. Pure genius. I think you did an amazing job with portraying the characters, and my fictional self is rather kickass, if I may say so. ^_^

:D
More please :3
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Damn!

I love it so far. That bitch Paul is a shiesty hoe. It was a very emotional first chapter. They say first impressions last forever and your first chapter was a great first impression on me. Cant wait til the next update! [:

AAAAAH!

I loves it so far. It was super intense and your writing style is fabulous. I'm uber excited to see what happens amongst Jessica and Syn... Paul is a douche, and I want to eat his brains with a fork. Hopefully Syn will make everything better. ::sly2:

AMAZINNGNGNGDRKSADSF JOB! And I definitely subscribed and can't wait for more.

This is gonna be amazing! ^-^
I can tell.

please update please i wanna know what happens its really good i wanna know lol xxx

hello stranger :) i love your stories you need to update every single one of them

it looks like its going to be a good story! i love a good haner story to read(: cant wait to read more darlin

Ooooooooooooh sounds interesting.... *subscribes* Don't let me down :) I'd like a really good Syn story to read.
Only thing to point out is the "He didn't even have to answer at that point. She just wanted to get out of there. It was too much to bare." The bare is meant to be bear.
Can't wait for an update :)

I love your fictional self. If, however, you ever need someone to kick Paul's ass...I am available to do that for you. He's a douchebag, and...yeah. It's pretty awesome that you chose to go to Johnny's Bar, too. I wonder who you're gonna run into there, huh? Perhaps a very sexy, dark-haired, dark-eyed guitar god, maybe? XD Can't wait for the next chapter! :D