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  • SmallWonders

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    I love this chapter, it was really good, but they're are a lot of mistakes grammatically and sentence wise.
    March 13th, 2011 at 03:14pm
  • Drowning Upwards

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    :) ahhhh! i had this totally awesome comment but now i can't remember because there was a sound coming for my brothers room, it was like a vibrator against the wall BUT i love this story, couldn't stop smiling, yahda yahda yahda....LOVEE!!!
    March 13th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • we are criticized.

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    Awhhhh, thats so damn cute. I hate this bet ): Its guna kill Dakota if he finds out the wrong way, and tehn Rider is screwed ):

    Sadness.
    March 12th, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • understand

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    that's right he could fall in love!
    March 12th, 2011 at 07:26pm
  • Frank_Iero

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    that was such a good chapter!
    but im so nervous about like everything thast going to happen.
    more soon!!!
    March 12th, 2011 at 07:14pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    omg i love this story so much...i want more updates!!
    please?
    March 5th, 2011 at 06:03pm
  • SmallWonders

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    Awwwwww adorable :)
    March 3rd, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • understand

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    It's a trap!
    February 27th, 2011 at 06:47pm
  • we are criticized.

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    I like it also, (:
    Its just going to be devastating if Dakota finds out about the bet.
    February 27th, 2011 at 02:14am
  • Frank_Iero

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    rider is soo confusing.
    he thinks hes all bad ass but he just needed someone to soften him up :D
    February 26th, 2011 at 09:16pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    YAY an update!!!
    i was so excited
    i love this chapter...riders breaking down yay
    February 26th, 2011 at 07:37pm
  • lovepop32

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    Its real good...cant wait for more progression in their relationship, even though they its still a bet
    February 21st, 2011 at 08:16pm
  • Hezzarther

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    and now I feel like the texts will be a problem.
    February 21st, 2011 at 06:44am
  • SmallWonders

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    Dakota getting into his head is a good thing.
    February 21st, 2011 at 12:43am
  • early_graves

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    Aw! Rider needs new friends
    February 20th, 2011 at 05:20pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    its been a week and still no update:(
    sad:(
    i was excited to see one
    oh well
    i love this so update really soon:)
    love ya:)
    February 12th, 2011 at 06:05am
  • SmallWonders

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    Ive been delaying in reading this but now im mad that i didnt read it later this is EPICALLY AMAZING!
    February 11th, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    whats going on with Dakota??? and i'm pretty sure Rider is getting a lot more feelings for Dakota!
    February 6th, 2011 at 06:05am
  • Frank_Iero

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    its kinda heartbreaking that dakota is starting to like rider so much, seeing as hes just goign to end up hurting him one way or another. but i liiike that, keeps things interesting.
    February 6th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • we are criticized.

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    It kills me how Rider is doing the bet. Even if he does fall for Dakota hes kinda screwed, which I assume is going to happen:P
    buut yes I like alot!
    February 5th, 2011 at 06:27pm
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