aw it's so cute ! yeah i hate smokers, like the saying goes "no one likes kissing a smoker" except those who smoke themselves.. yeah anyway ! i am loving this and hope you two continue ^^
i like Dakota's POV cause his thoughts are so naaaw :3 i just wanna cuddle him so hard hehe
wow rider, going all out just to break his heart. what an asshole. i know this is those sort of bet/dare stories that have lies and deceit and heartbreak but then the person realises they actually love them yada yada , but the difference is that it's a boyxboy story, which in my book, automatically makes it read worthy and awesome ^^,
:) I think Dakota could still get out of the date because who's to say how long he'll quit smoking? huh after less than a day you wont know he could relapse So I think the date shouldn't be that soon :) Hope Dakotas heart dun get broken.
Dokota is sooo cute. I can't wait to find out what happens. I really think that Rider should stop the bet. I don't want Dokota to be heartbroken :(. Update please! <3
I reaaally like this story; I hope that Rider starts to think of Dakota as more than a challenge soon. Dakota is so cute, I don't want him to get hurt. :< I love how he got mad at Rider when he spoke for him.
i love it...i hope you update soon:)