Do You Hear Me Scream? - Comments

  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    this story is so amazing<333
    i love it...i hope you update soon:)
    February 5th, 2011 at 02:48pm
  • Hezzarther

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    What?

    Mini golf,
    then a creep house?

    What?
    January 30th, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • IncandescentLiz

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    This is absolutely amazing. :D
    More, more, more!
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:34pm
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    omg!!! what's in the house!?
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:55pm
  • polka dot perfection

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    adorable:D
    January 17th, 2011 at 03:40am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    awww :3
    January 16th, 2011 at 04:18am
  • polka dot perfection

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    more! more!
    January 11th, 2011 at 02:55am
  • we are criticized.

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    i like(:
    January 11th, 2011 at 02:51am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    what's the problem with him and his brother?!
    January 11th, 2011 at 01:56am
  • J I N X

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    aw it's so cute ! yeah i hate smokers, like the saying goes "no one likes kissing a smoker" except those who smoke themselves.. yeah anyway ! i am loving this and hope you two continue ^^

    i like Dakota's POV cause his thoughts are so naaaw :3 i just wanna cuddle him so hard hehe

    wow rider, going all out just to break his heart. what an asshole. i know this is those sort of bet/dare stories that have lies and deceit and heartbreak but then the person realises they actually love them yada yada , but the difference is that it's a boyxboy story, which in my book, automatically makes it read worthy and awesome ^^,

    can't wait for more from you two , excited ! ~ !
    January 8th, 2011 at 05:38pm
  • RiverStyx

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    :) I think Dakota could still get out of the date because who's to say how long he'll quit smoking? huh after less than a day you wont know he could relapse So I think the date shouldn't be that soon :)
    Hope Dakotas heart dun get broken.
    December 31st, 2010 at 02:23pm
  • Frank_Iero

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    i reaaaaaaaally liked that chapter :D
    December 23rd, 2010 at 12:54am
  • BVBfoREVer5554

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    Dokota is sooo cute. I can't wait to find out what happens. I really think that Rider should stop the bet. I don't want Dokota to be heartbroken :(. Update please! <3
    December 20th, 2010 at 08:16pm
  • Hezzarther

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    o:
    December 20th, 2010 at 08:12am
  • stark

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    I reaaally like this story; I hope that Rider starts to think of Dakota as more than a challenge soon. Dakota is so cute, I don't want him to get hurt. :< I love how he got mad at Rider when he spoke for him.

    Waaah, update soon or I might not make it! D:
    December 20th, 2010 at 05:12am
  • BlueLips-and-DoeEyes

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    Dear you, you should update again really soon. :) Please?
    Love, me.
    xox
    December 20th, 2010 at 04:23am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    aww...i poor Dakota...chris&andy are mean!
    December 20th, 2010 at 02:16am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    aww...i poor Dakota...chris&andy are mean!
    December 20th, 2010 at 02:16am
  • Hezzarther

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    this guy is freaking insane.
    why smash the cigarettes?
    DD:
    December 15th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    omg!!!!!!! he's quitting!?!?? :O whoaa.....
    December 14th, 2010 at 11:50pm