Took me 12 hours (with breaks!) but I read the whole thing and it was pretty great. I really like the characters. Gabby was just cool, and not a simple Mary-Sue. She was a fun character, and great paired with Samantha. I like that Jon and Pat were not set on shining pedestals and it was recognised that they probably do have some pretty normal faults. On the other hand it's also nice that you didn't jump to the other end of the continuum and make Jon out to be a complete skuzzbag because of his obviously serious mistakes. Who doesn't love a good love triangle? Thanks a lot for this one :D
I'm not even going to lie, I was very sad when I got the update for this and realized it was the last chapter. Once I finished reading it I had a bit of a freak out too. Something along the lines of yelling, "Ohmygod, it's over! No, it can't be over! Ahh!"...I guess you could then say that I'm really sad that it's over.
But I loved every second of it! It was an amazing story. :)
I love love love love this story! And your use of spanish, I don't know if you speak it, was awesome and just perfect! I love love love love love it! :)
This chapter was sooooo sweet!! I absolutely love how you wrote Patrick Kane in this story! And I can't believe Jon did that for Patrick...I love this!! I'm sad there's only one chapter left!
Knowing that there is only one chapter left makes me want to cry! But I'm so happy that Gabby and Patrick are together in the end. I can't wait to read the final chapter though! :D
Awww this story is so awesome :) I really hope she ends up with Patrick though xD Spain could be okay.... but I'm gonna miss the Patrick fluff... :P Update soon!
The only thing was it appears that Gabby is going to choose Patrick. I cant help thinking that if Stacey had come out sooner, Jon and Gabby would still be together.
I really like the characters.
Gabby was just cool, and not a simple Mary-Sue. She was a fun character, and great paired with Samantha.
I like that Jon and Pat were not set on shining pedestals and it was recognised that they probably do have some pretty normal faults. On the other hand it's also nice that you didn't jump to the other end of the continuum and make Jon out to be a complete skuzzbag because of his obviously serious mistakes.
Who doesn't love a good love triangle?
Thanks a lot for this one :D