Totally didnt see that one comming! But it certainly explains alot.
Now will Gabby be able to forgive Jon? I venture to say that if it had not been for the "engagement", she and Jon would never have broken up in the first place.
I'm usually a very silent reader, but after that last update, I just had to comment. Let me tell you, that breakup between Jon and Stacey was genius. Never read that in a story before. As soon as I started the chapter I was like, "Tell me Stacey is a cheater!" Well, I sure didn't expect THAT outcome. I can't lie though, it made me laugh hysterically for some reason as well.
I can't wait for the next update!
btdubs, totally a Team Patrick Peep over here for this story. :P
whenever i read stories like this i always think of that lil quote "If you've fallen in love with two people, always choose the 2nd because you must not have loved the 1st enough to love someone else". never loved two people at once so i cant really compare. but Patrick all the way :)
I can not wait for Jon to tell Stacy and Gabby to make up her mind. I am still at a toss up for who I am rooting for, I feel like I need to hear about Jon's relationship and how he explains it to Stacey. I can not wait for the update to see what the shock is, great story!!
I am pretty sure that Gabby still loves Jon - or else she would not have fallen back so easily. There is a deep emotional attachment there that both of them - for different reasons - have tried to deny.
We know why Gabby tried to put the relationship behind her - Jon was "cheating" on her. But we are waiting for Jon's explanation.
Also I expect major drama when Jon confronts Stacey with his decision. Cant wait!!!
Sorry that was bitchy. What I meant was I'll never be able to see gabby and pat back together and I officially think gabby is a whore. Eh that's still bitchy. I respect your writing but I don't like the story line anymore. There that was nice. :)
I have a feeling there is more to Jon's story than we know. I think we will find that Jon never really went back to Stacey - that he and Stacey never had sex since he met Gabby.
Even in the past chapters, I felt there was some real unfinished business with Jon and Gabby. And that last chapter just proved it - there were definite fireworks!!!
As much as Gabby and Pat were cute, you can definitely count me on Team Toews.
I hate Jon. Why is he such a jerk. He just had sex with his Friend's girl. And why is she so stupid she knows she is in love with pat so why would ruin that. You should have her tell Jon that what they did will never happen again cause she doesn't feel the same like when they were together. Cause once a cheater always a cheater. O and I love ur story
I am at a toss up for who I want to be with her, I mean Patrick treated her perfectly and Jon lied to her about his relationship with Stacy. There is something though about Jon that pulls me to him too! Ahh I don't know who I would pick. Love the update and can't wait to see what happens next!