Told u I'd leave a real comment XP but guess wut? I finished this n 1 day! Hahahaha!!!!!! It was amazing! I saw such a hange n ur writing style 2! Ur a wonderful writer an I plan on reading some of ur OTher stories soon :)
i personally like long stories but if you dont want your story to be long you could always just make the chapters longer and then there wnt have to be so many chapters