Their Struggle. - Comments

awesome write more please

WTF!? Ur story isnt lousy! Its awesome! I love it!

OMG THIS IS AMAZING KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!! :)

Awe, I started to cry. I really like this update. It shows the love she has, and how much he means to her. :D Keep up the great writtings(:

Sweettt story. Keep updating! :D You're pure talent.

AMAZIGN STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you stop writing it i will diiiez yepp its amazing!!!! ah :3

Poor Macy.... She must be really mad! =S

Lmao ha...
Kiss scenes are easy...
Sex scenes are hard to write lemme tell you.

I'm not going to lie I think this story needs a lot of work. I feel like it's going to fast and it's missing all the things that should be happening in between them falling for eachother.

I love this story plz update soon

I loved loved loved loved loved this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up i want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon! ^.^

update soon! =D

Is worth the 10 stars!!! =D I really like the story! =D So keep up with the good work! =D

1. OMGZ THATS AWESOME :D
2.i like it cuz its funny and i dont know has a cool plot
3.i sub cuz its very interesting and comment cuz then you'll stop writing
4.update please !

Heads up the last two chapters are the same. But I am really liking it so far :) I can't wait for more :)

she remembered :D update please

Love th story! Update soon! =D

the plot is really good - tho i vaguely remembering reading sumthng very similar on quizilla - nd maybe u need to work on thr writing part of it... bt u still did a gud job!

Aww poor Macy and Sam! Stupid Aiden and then he gets another human girl! I hope they live