*cries* NO I DON'T WANT A CLIFFHANGER!! Well, it's not 'really' a cliffhanger but it's enough of one! First Gabe talks to him..then Bden..I'm curious to see how this plan will turn out.
You're Welcome! I'm still loving this layout! I'm jealous!
o.o holy cows...ch31! DAMMIT!! I LOVE IT!! SO much tension then the fighting, then Jess getting threatened, being torn between the two of them. Gabe is handsome but Bden is better for her in the end.
Well, well. the plot got even better! I really enjoy how Jess stood up fro herself, that made me proud!!! This Dallon is an interesting person...want to know more about him. So, he did turn William right?
-layout! OMG I LOVE IT! I thing the colors are amazing, and I really love the photo in the book. Photos on one side with the title then you have the authors on the other. Totally cool!
Interesting, Brendon can sense that they have some followers? -evil laugh- I really like how Willy is kind of upset with himself, he didn't want Ashley to see the other women. That just sounds bad..other women.
I've noticed that bits of Chapter 27 are eerily similar, if not identical, to those in Let's Kill Tonight. If this is a case of plagiarism, it's quite shameful for it to be showing up in something co-written and have it made obvious in a related story. I'm just warning that if this happens again, as it has many times to alphadisaster, I will report it.
I loved it! I miss this story, I still like Ashley. She's made a lot of progress and stuff. Dallon? That is a strange name, he's been gone for awhile. Hopefully it won't take long to find him