I am surprised this has not been updated, simply due to how many comments this got for just the prologue. IT seems like a really good idea and I would encourage you to expand upon it, since I normally leave pretty detailed comment only stories with at least 2-3 chapters so I can see recurring mistakes I can;t really give you a review. But I did enjoy what I did read and I hope you continue on.
September 18th, 2011 at 09:48pm