Scars - Comments

Oooh, so Jake and Brian already know each other! Maybe that would make things a little easier if Tonya and Bri got together. Hehe, now I'm super excited, but that's nothing new when I read one of your stories :)
Ahh, my name is in your story! I love it when that happens; makes me imagine I'm there, and that makes the story even more realistic than you already make it.
Anywhoo, enough rambling. Loved the update hun!

Great update! I loved it!

I really like this story! It's funny that Dan was Jake's Jiujitsu teacher. :] Lol, but anyways. Great update! More soon. :]

Oh, I like it! Brian as a tattoo artist... Yes, I can definitely see it. I think that it would be incredibly practical to date someone who does tattoos for a living. Imagine how cheap getting new tattoos would be! :P I'm excited for more! :)

Like where this is headed.

Great update!

WTF was I thinkin?! I should've chased him out the fucking bar! LMAO! Ima get him and I know it, along with his name tattooed on my ass! Oh yeah, went there. And I immediately thought Estelle was Andie! Hurry up and gimme some updates on this before I die or something! :)

Huh. So yeah. If I were Tonya, I'd be calling that man up pronto. I think -- no, that's wrong -- I KNOW Brian can help her move on, in more ways than one.
Loved the update hun!!

The font & background colour make it a little hard to read.

I agree with xo.Mistress.Gates.xo, it is sexy that Brian's a tattooist. XD Lmao, anywho, I love this story! It's so good. XD More soon!

ooo Brian is a tattooist...thats sexy lol
i wonder if Tonya will be calling him anytime soon...

awesome update! =)

Tonya and Jake seem as though they have a typical mother/ teenager relationship. I think Estelle sounds like a hoot (and I will always think of me when I read about her as Estelle is my middle name :D) The idea of Brian being a tattoo artist is just..mmmmm. Let's just say if he was mine, I'd be covered in ink ;) And Paradise....yeah, think I know what kind of store that is...

I absolutely loved it hun, fantastic :) xx

i think its awesome!!! plz write more soon =]!

Awww, that's really sad. :[ Very good start, though! More soon. :]

Aw sad start :(
But looking forward to more!

Aww thats so sad...Loved it though, can't wait to see what happens next.

Sounds really good so far hun, can't wait to see what you have in store with this one :) xx

This already has an amazing backstory to give the rest of the events depth, so I'm excited as all hell to read this!!

amazing!
i cant wait to see where this goes! =)

Good god, everybody already commented on the summary! I must say being, what 26 again, makes me giggle. Am I skinny? hahahahhaha Can't wait to see what you do here.