Half Past the Point of No Return - Comments

Whoa! that was twisted! You're writing was really amazing in this one, just with all the detail and emotion. Gah, I loved it :)
I'm not in anticipation of what Johnny's is! Urination or defication? haha gross. Just my theory!
Oh btw when she was with Jimmy and it said something like "I checked his body for bumps." I immediately thought BONER haha but then she was checking for weapons and I was like wow I feel like a pervert. lol.
Update more often woman! :)

*fan girl scream.* Johnny is going to be in the next chapter :D
I thought the chapter was really good, I found Zacky scary and cool at the same time.
Please update soon.

Again suspenseful! Loved it. (:

I love it <3
You are a genious with your creative writing talents (:
I want more!

This story intrigues me :)
It's filled with suspense , something I crave.
Even if the boys are bad guys in this story I love it!
Update soon :)

i love it so far..your a great writer and i cant wait till u post again!

Amazing.:] Like the other stories.:] Keep it up...please?

This story seems really interesting.
Please update soon.

this story is addicting!

What next, what next?
This story really does have me hooked, I can't wait for the next part. That was definitely worth the wait, hope your exams go well :)

I like your story you had enough details so i could feel her emotions. By the way the blue is kinda hard to read at times.

This is amazing!

Wow I can't believe he did that to her. The guys are completely crazy. I can't wait for the next update. And I here you on the exams I took one today and I thought my brain was about to explode.

You updated again literally after I commented. I spoke to soon about the sex thing haha

My heart speeds so fast when I read this story! It's amazing.

Btw, it's really hard to read when you have that amazingly hot picture on the side :)

This story really..disturbs me for some reason. Like, the part with Jimmy reminds me of this horror movie May, where she makes a doll out of body parts of people she knows idk just creepy like that.

I expected like sex then you bring out the choking and I was like WHOA!

Oh, and, you kinda had to make Brian the nice one in THIS one. You killed him off in a story after all, it's only fair lol.

eeeeeep, that was intense.
it's going to take a lot of will power to survive, if it gets worse.
I love this, it's really uncertain, gripping.
Can't wait for more.

will she survive? I can`t wait to read more!

<:( Aw. I feel so bad for her.
This is so good. Please update soon.
I wonder what other things they would do to her? :/

loving it already

This is a great story! So different and unpredictable I can't wait to find out what is gonna happen next