Half Past the Point of No Return - Comments

Okay, This times this is going to be a bit different I guess.
First of all, I would like to tell you that the story line is awesome. Second I think you should describe Isabella a bit more as a character cause her personality is still a bit blurry to me. Third, Jimmy is a CREEP damn! I just love him and the way he talks, the way he does everything and how he thinks she is a Doll. Jimmy is the best Character so far.
I think that you are great at describing everything in the story, but also you should try to describe the place a bit more because I found it a bit hard to imagine it. But it was beautiful as it always is.
What else What else what else? OH yeah! I actually think that this chapter is very long you should try to divide it.
I loved the idea, it is so.... TWISTED. I cant wait for more.
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I'm really pulled into this story.

Wow this is great... very creepy imagery of them "changing" her.. really helps to get the feel of her very much being their doll. And to know shes not the first must be disheartening because in reality... when is one poor girl gonna overpower five guys and be the last. i love this its great cant wait for more. i think i just said great twice its so good im repeating myself! lol please update :D

eeeeeeeee, this is so good!
you're really good at describing, and it makes it such a good read. I can't wait to see what happens next, it's pretty unpredictable at the moment :)

the story sounds awesome so far and I can't wait to see where it goes

love the gerard way qoute for a chapter title. This story is very well written. I just can't wait to find out if she fights it all through out it all and escape, or if she'll die or if she'll get stocklohm sindrome,(where the person falls in love with their captor) Can't wait for more.

Kidnapped by avenged sevenfold? Are you serious? Because this is so unrealistic. I read it, and everything is like a dream.

Anyways, it was well written, so you are a good writer. And the description was very nice. I think that's a plus, because not many people master description. So yeah, I liked it.

This sounds great already, hope to see you post some more :)

hey i just wanted to tell you that this story already sounds interesting and i hope u put up another chapter soon. i have subscribed so i will know when it does so i can read it :)