Not Insane - Comments

So sad but to bad. They were home at the wrong time if ya ask me. Anyway that girl is a pycho bitch and matt's a cold hearted killer.

-foREVer<3

Holy zombie. Woman, this is fucked up.. so amazingly fucked up >:)
I'm seriously jealous of your mad skills.
It was like reading a picture, ya know? I could literally see it playing out in my mind. And that's hard because I don't have a photographic mind; but, you wrote it in a way that the words turned into a picture.
Simply fantastic.

Bad-ass! :D

This won 1st place! woot congrats!

SO SAD. </3
I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT THOSE TWO AT THE END. BOOM SHOT DEAD MOTHER FUCKER. I BET THAT THEY WERE LOVELY INDIVIDUALS. D:

- coughs -
This was so fucked up bro.
Like from start to finish.
But it was amazing nonetheless.

I liked how you told why they didn't say I love you. As I was reading I got this image of them driving away in the car that was in the music video for Bat Country. It would have been cool if you kind of gave us an in sight as to why they're insane ass holes that murder people, but it is a two-shot and not a giant story so I guess we'll let it slide. ;)

The way you ended the story was my favourite.
It tied the title in perfectly and I could seriously see Kat Von D writing in blood, so you obviously offered a really clear visual. LOL.

Awesome story. ;)
And like said twenty minutes ago.
You no stop writing till your dead.

This was fantastic, darlin'! <3

I really liked how you depicted their relationship; it was very Bonnie and Clyde and that just made it all the more kickass! XD

I totally agree with some of the other comments; this would make a great full story with the rest of the gang and whatnot. I'd totally subscribe! You wrote this very well and I enjoyed it from start to finish!

Great job; you're an awesome writer!

Damn, why do all the users here have such amazing layouts? As previous said, quite amazing layout and banner.

Chapter One
...much straight the since the beginning, they are going to piece it together eventually.
o.o I don't think the 'the' should go there.

...We were in an old country styled house...
I was thinking that it was maybe an hotel but it would have been capatilized otherwise.
So I'm sure an "an" should go there.

Chapter Two
I found no mistakes. :D

You did a good job introducing the characters. You made it sound as though what they were doing was something natural and not crazy as it is. You introduced us to their relationship, how both of them needed each other since they are on the same level of insanity. This story reminds me of a movie I saw, I totally forgot the name but it sounds very alike. Although, to write such sceneries with words is a true talent. Don't ever give up. You're an amazing writer.

I can tell both characters are quite in love, or hold on to each other rather much. I wouldn't doubt, however, that Matt would sacrifice her if it benefited her, that's how insanity gets to you, right?

This was an amazing piece, really. Keep up the good work. :3

Holy poop. I think this is fantastic. I don't really like A7X in fact, I kind of hate them. But for you my dear I will read this. :) I really enjoy your writing style. I don't know why I don't read more of it. It kind of makes me want ot hug you.

The first sentence of the story really captured my attention. The way you wrote this story gives a perfect mental picture, making it that much more interesting to read.

I don't think I've ever read something quite like this on mibba, it certainly is original. I liked the story, it was a very interesting read.

:O Man, I've never seen anything quite like this. And I've definitely never seen the idea of love being explored as a bond between two killers.
Excellent description; the only errors I saw were that, sometimes, you don't capitalize the first letter after a quotation mark.
This story is probably going to lurk in the back of my mind and creep me out for days...nice job xD

This was brilliant!! I loved your characters and the plot!! This whole story was just awesome. I enjoyed your description because I felt like it painted the perfect picture in my head. Well done!!! I can't wait to read more of your things in the future.

One word AMAZING:)

she's totally lying, she is insane, lol, but i loved this!

^^^ Agree with above!
I really liked this short story, I thought it was very good indeed.
I do too think you should make a series out of this!

<3

That was fucked up in the best kind of way :D
It was amazing. I wish it was longerrrr. You should think of making an actual series out of that and add in the rest of the gang. It was epic!

wow cant wait for more!!!

Oh wow, this is indeed quite intense. Yet bloody hot :) xx

ONEEFFINGCOMMENTAREYOUFORSERIOUS?
Well that's despicable. o_o
OH YAAH COMMENT TIME YAAH.

This was sexy.
And unexpecting.
And pretty much the shit.

"I liked to use the blood as paint." From the first opening sentence it was awesome. And pretty messed up. But that'skay because we all love those types of stories. Obvs.

This is original and I love it. Only you have the ability to make story this screwed up. It's great. <3

We were meant for each other. D'AW. I loved the ending. :'D So coot.

Also. Kat Von Dee? Yeah SEX.
Also. Shadows? Yeah SEX.

This story is like. Sex.
Totes ma goats.

Omg this was awesome.
Update soon yeah?