great update! Loved it!
January 24th, 2011 at 07:11pm
Loved the update. Can't wait till the next chapter.
by the way.. there were a few errors... mostly you write "to" instead of "too" but that's about it :)
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January 24th, 2011 at 07:07pm
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Ahaha, Gee's gonna be PISSED..wonder if Jo's gonna get w/ Franky? If they do Zacky will be jealous:DJanuary 24th, 2011 at 07:07pm
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON...I LOVE IT!!!January 20th, 2011 at 07:17pm
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Very awesome I love the whole message in a bottle idea, very different and original. Love the story update soon!!January 19th, 2011 at 12:03am
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Loved the update :)
can't wait for when Zacky arrives!
more soon!January 18th, 2011 at 08:18am -
I love it!! I can't wait til Zacky comes stay with her for a bit. It seems like a really awesome story and would love to read more. Update soon :)January 18th, 2011 at 01:54am
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(:January 18th, 2011 at 12:12am
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ZVee's gonna be jealous!!:)January 17th, 2011 at 07:34pm
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Nice update :)
there were a few errors...
"We both knew how to cook well, but no matter what we were still the worst critics of our it. "
You wrote "none alcoholic" instead of "non-alcoholic".
also there were a few missing words... Again, I'd go back an re-read the chapter.
What I do, when I post new chapters; I read the entire chapter to make sure everything makes sense before posting. :)January 17th, 2011 at 06:47pm -
aww they are getting closer :P
loove this!!!!!!January 12th, 2011 at 06:31am -
I loved this chapter, Dasha.
It always makes me smile when I see updates for this story. And you got my personality spot on in this. I've actually dropped eggs and flour. 
I also liked how Zacky talked Johanna through her feelings about her mother. It was sweet, and cute, and it's really showing the progression of emotions between the two of them. I can't wait to see where else you go with this, Dasha! It's one of my favorite stories, like all of yours. :) January 9th, 2011 at 11:26pm -
Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter! there were few errors. Just spelling. a few missing letters.January 9th, 2011 at 10:26pm
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more please i love thisssJanuary 9th, 2011 at 04:03pm
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Yay! He going to spend the holiday wih Jo... Their going to fall in love can't wait for moreJanuary 9th, 2011 at 01:14pm
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, i'm so into the story and BAM, no more chapters :'( can't wait till you upload:3 so far i've read this story+Sound of the north wind, they're both amazing! you're such a good writer, can't wait for the updates:DJanuary 5th, 2011 at 02:24pm
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This story makes me do a little happy dance! I love it! PLEASE update soonsies!January 4th, 2011 at 06:24am
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Loved it! update soon!
~KaylaJanuary 4th, 2011 at 12:52am -
Loved the update!Lovey lovey love love loved it. hahaha :D
Also, very few errors. A few missing letters and wrong spellings... I'd go back and re-read the chapter.
But still kudos! :DJanuary 3rd, 2011 at 10:51pm -
The story is very detailed:) That's why I love it. Awesome update!!January 3rd, 2011 at 08:43pm
