Message in a Bottle - Comments

This was an amazing chapter. I hope that nobody gets hurt in the end even though some one will. I love Matt in this though.

I squealed when I found out you updated :) and I was not disappointed either. I love how your writing keeps the story interesting but never moving too quickly, I hate when good stories are ruined because the chain of events happen unrealistically fast! Not the case here though... Can't wait for the next update :)

oooooh he wanna visit her i bet XD

What? Is Zack trying to stay at Johanna's? Well anyway; this is such a great story!! I'm so glad a happened to stumble upon it :D

THIS IS SO AWESOME. Seriously, KEEEP WRITING M'DEAR.

i enjoy reading this awesome story! more soon!

I lovee it so far.
*subscribes*
Can't wait for the next update hun.
:)

Aww!!! Zacky's falling for her. I think he should just break it for with Gena and date Jojo... lol. And I think it's cool he wants to spend the holidays with her... well I can't wait for more... awesome update.....

awesomeness!

If he asks her what I think he's going to ask her, I think I might just faint from happiness, Dasha. I love this story so much, and seeing the progression of emotions between the two of them just makes it even better. I also love the fact that unlike so many stories about Zacky, you're not making Gena a bitch. I like that she's just there in the relationship and that the spark was lost instead of making her into this ravenous, cutthroat bitch that so many people write her as. And I like how Matt is trying to give Zacky his options but also give him a little common sense, and help steer him in the right direction. Which, in the end, is gonna be Johanna. I really love this story, Dasha, and I can't wait to see more of it and her reply.

Commendable update. And here goes the error report. haha

In Johanna's P. O. V. you used plurals without the plural part... haha ex. "pant" where it should be "pants". Also in J's part, you were explaining things almost repetitively. More like you were explaining the certain detail in a circle. Where as you didn't need that much explanation.

In Z's part, there were a few spelling errors. I didn't have an example for his... :D

Still a good story though. I enjoy reading... I also liked your author's note at the end. :)

Helloo! new reader and subscriber! I completely love this! it's so different then the other stories.
more soon please!

I just found this... I absolutely LOVE IT! please update soon!

so excited cant wait for the next update.. =] your a great writer..

soo i just found this and its amazing!!!!!!
loove this and hope for more soon!!

Love it. I love how Matt knows but Brian doesn't. And I can relate to the road rage and I don't even drive. XD

Wow, I've never seen a story written with a such unique plot.
This story is amazing!<3

aww, i just love this story. i`m most definetly subscribing!

I just started reading... And love it! You're a great writer, the plots not too fast at all and it is so sifferent from other A7x stories... I really can't wait for the next update :)

I just got caught up and I love it... Please more soon?