So Fucking Fine - Comments

I really liked this a lot. The quote was interesting, the story more so. I love how you mad everyone be so awkward around her and not know what to do. It made it seem more realistic.

You did a good job. :]

My mom was trying to talk to me, but I was reading it haha. I really wanted to know what was going to happen, so bad that I got a good slap on the head from her lol. I think you used the picture in a good way. I was very curious to see what you’d come up with and I never would have thought it would be written from a guys point of view about a girl.

I especially love the quote in the summary. It really shines a light on the atmosphere of the story. I love it even more when you brought it into the story. I actually giggled that he yelled it. Romantic in a morbid atmosphere.

Bravo.