and i love this so much you don't understand the first chapter is and genius and perfect and i'm fairly sure i've fallen in love with all of your male characters
Well aren't I terrible at keeping up. Hi so this is lovely. I love how you write Sebastian's thoughts like so confused and uncertain but so: "Fuck you, I'm Sebastian West and I know me better than you know me, I think". So yeah. I like Sebastian and I really like that bloke Erik Lubomirov's line. c: mwah mwah dahling.
This is amazing. I'm sorry it took me so long to getting around to reading it. I have a bunch of stories to read -_- but I am so happy this was the first one because it was amazing. I love age difference stories, and I think I'm going to love this. Actually I know I'm going to love this. And I love the line in the characters under Sloane. I always say I'm Switz when people get in arguments. So all in all loveeeee this.
Oh my god that was such a lovely first chapter. I loved the way you wrote it, as a narrorator but still TOTALLY inside his head and his emotions and the choppy way it was that added so much tension and mystery and beauty. This reminds me of Sloane with the writing style, which you know is my favorite story ever, so I'm just totally over the moon and thrilled :D
hai raffella joe, you've got a dream cast and this is fucking sexy ❁◕‿◕❁ and i know nobody says "sexy" anymore but it's the only word andandnandndnd i really really like this ❁◕‿◕❁ please please start this soon