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  • mockingbird;

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    YOU NEED TO WRITE THIS, KAY?
    June 22nd, 2011 at 09:56pm
  • paper flowers

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    You? Yeah, you. You're... amazing.
    June 7th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • two birds

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    THIS LOOKS AMAZING! The character page alone got me on edge, and then the summary?! I can't wait for this to start, dear.
    May 6th, 2011 at 03:26am
  • OH YESH

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    Whoa, cool.
    May 6th, 2011 at 12:37am
  • oh bear

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    YOU NEED TO WRITE THIS NOOOOOOOOOW.
    May 1st, 2011 at 08:36am
  • mockingbird;

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    WRITE THIS OR FACE MY WRATH.

    Lol, jk <3
    April 16th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    when are you starting this? it sounds really good, and im excited to read it :)
    April 13th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • puke

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    cool c:
    the girl you casted as lex is so gorg
    and ash stymest is my favorite <3

    ill have to read your sloane winters stories soon!!
    April 10th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • mockingbird;

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    Wait I saw the pictures in the charcter thing, and I like those, a lot.
    April 9th, 2011 at 04:49pm
  • mockingbird;

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    Yay I love the changes

    Justonethingdon'tgetmadbecayouknowIloveyoudearly....

    I liked the old people who portrayed the characters better a little. But other than that, I love the changes you've made, and I Love the change in tone in the summary, and moer Sloane action going on!

    Whootwhoot
    April 9th, 2011 at 04:47pm
  • leavingggggggg

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    Hi, this is amazing, so.
    You need to put some mothereffing chapters up, girl.
    April 3rd, 2011 at 08:51am
  • jolie sophie

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    i love this story, even if I haven't read the Finding Sloane Winters Crazy.
    I'm really enjoying the feel of it and the simplicity of it
    December 14th, 2010 at 04:58am
  • tiedieeyes

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    LOVE IT ALREADY!
    December 14th, 2010 at 12:53am
  • The Doctor

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    I really, really liked this. You have no idea. There were a few sentence structure problems but the overall beginning was amazing. It held my attention and was so creatively written that you stand out from nearly all the other writers on here.
    Keep up the good work!
    ~Allie
    December 6th, 2010 at 06:53am
  • love only knows

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    I won't be silent anymore :)
    This story beginning leaves me hanging!
    What is this business with Lex? Who is Lex?
    Why are both Meggie and Lex in love with Sebastian?
    Answer my questions with an update?
    That'd be sweet of you :) haha.
    I quite like this beginning. Quite do!!
    Update soon, please. For my sanity :)
    December 2nd, 2010 at 05:18am
  • who cried wolf?

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    i like it
    more soon please
    December 2nd, 2010 at 02:36am
  • eternity.

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    Oh, haha I messed up on the coding..sorry! D:

    You got two comments from me. :D
    December 1st, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • eternity.

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    I agree with Mockingbird;

    I am in love with this, already.[/size

    The start was wonderful! It wasn't boring at all, I promise. I really can't wait to see how the characters unravel, just as well as the plot!

    Subbing; update soon! :D
    December 1st, 2010 at 10:15pm
  • Never Coming Back

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    The start was not boring at all. Sebastian is one of my favorite names by the way. Hahaha. But that was an eventful first chapter. I loved it.
    December 1st, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • thewolf.

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    I am very excited for this story. You are a terrific writer and your ideas are completely original, which is a rare find on this site. I can not wait for the next one. Great job.
    December 1st, 2010 at 03:12pm