No Time To Bleed - Comments

Painter's Dream, you ROCK \m/

I read this before and loved it <333
I love Jasmine's attitude, thinking if her friends
Jessica's a b*tch xD
You do not know how happy I was when she died :P
I like the layout, the text is easy to read :)
I like how descrptive it is <3
The mental image I got was fabulous :)
Overall this story is bad ass xD
I love this zombie fic lol

I almost cried reading the epilogue lol Alex and Jasmine's relationship is adorable ;) R.I.P Ashton and Clarissa. I CAN'T BELIEVE Cece gave Kyle a chance. Jesse is a mess. Haha Ashley is a wreck. Ryant, Max and Lion are happy.

Brett Wiggins is an evil man.

I've just read up to chapter nineteen at the moment, so I'll be making a return soon! Mwuahah! And read more! I am loving your story! I could see everything happening like movie. LOVED IT. Oh, but poor William! D': It was more saddening that Jasmine got blamed in the end! What the heck? >:( So much to read but so little time. *Sigh.* Anyway, I shall be back soon. Well done so far, m'dear! You're such a talented writer. :')

Of course. Jasmine had to get beat up again xp. I love how Alex was being all protective

i know alex wouldn't have let go if he thoguht they were going to die, but Oh MY GOSH i haven't been able to comment like i want bcuz i've been reading at school (even though i'm not really supposed to.... i have my ways... lol) and i coulu never get all the way caught up since i never had enough to time to read all of it, buti'm at home now and YAY they finally found ryant, but what's gonna happen now that there's ryant, alex, jesse, and oh jeez i'm spacing for his name, but brett's son. there's obviously more fighting ahead and i can't wait to see what else you come up with!!!

Chapter;

I think that it's so adorable the way she's so protective of her new friend, Ryant. Awww! I hope they become the best of friends. :)

Jessica is so horrible and mean to Jasmine! >:( You don't know - well, actually, you might - how friggin' happy I was when Jasmine punched her. :')

The fall isnt far. Lol jasmine and max are safe xp

Chapter 4;

"Maybe this was (the)morning I'd actually punch this girl."

"“Long (comma, please) long story. Things are..."

Oh, my days, she told her him her surname. :) Does this mean that she's finally opening up? Aww. I hope that she and Ryant get along well in the future. Yay.

I'll come back and continue reading later! :)

Chapter 3;

"I'm not a mean person. I just hate being taken advantage of.

I'm not closed off. I'm just careful with who I trust."

I love the way these lines were put. Very understandable and powerful. They're simple, yet, deep. *Claps*

"So, why do I feel so empty away from the people who actually care for me?" Now I maybe wrong on this one, but it doesn't sound right no matter how many times I read it to myself. I think ... that there should be a comma right "empty"... Actually, now I'm just confused. Forget it, let's leave it as an option. Otherwise I'll never be able to move onto the next chapter. *Eyes-roll at self.*

Anyway, I thought that it was really sorrowful that she had to drown out the sounds of her cries with the music. I particularly like the way you wrote that because it explains so much more about Jasmine. Well to me. Aw. Lion seems so nice and kind to her! :)

Oh, and also! The choice of names are unique. Like Ryant; never heard of that name. o.0 I think it's unique. ^_^

Either that or I need to get out more. o.0

Chapter 2;

Oh, that Jesse got right on my nerves. *tut-tut*

"He let out a throaty laugh that shook the car windows." [Your descriptions are really good!]

Lovely chapter so far. Aw, the ending was a bit saddening. Guess she has an unpleasant past...

Hm, I've just read the first chapter and I really enjoyed it. :)
I like Jasmine's personality so far! I liked the way you've written about her and that she isn't one of the 'scared-kind-a' girls in school. So far, I like your story. I'll read on. >:D
By the way, I love reading about Zombies - they scare the hell out of me ... but I like reading about them. o.0

In fact I'm writing one of my own! Well, it's not a Zombie one, but it's a Vampire one, but not your sparkling or 'out-of-this-world' good-looks sort of Vamps. >:D

Could you please do me a favour and have a read? It's called "Hush." I don't mean to spam. I really don't. But I meant to ask you. :3 However, if there is any reason you cannot, I understand!

Anyway, I'll continue with the story now, mwuahahhah! Oh, my days - before I might forget - I think that your layout is lovely. :')

I just started reading this. So I can't say much, I'm not up to date yet. I like that you're the only one doing this...or well I hadn't noticed others yet, but it's a nice break from the usual.

I KNEW IT... THAT LITTLE PERV. Lol Jesse made Alex hella mad... I thought we had lost Jesse for a moment

I love the beginning of chapter 66 where jessica comes to jasmine's bed side. <3 Karma's a bitch Alex. Rotfl I hope Jesse wasnt going to tell jasmine he loves her, b/c that would be horrible

I wonder whats gonna happen with jasmine&alex... Cece&kyle?

I wonder whats gonna happen with jasmine&alex... Cece&kyle?

I'm really not sure what cece's plan is, but i feel like it involves me getting hurt

I'm still team alex, even though he's being a scary bitch. But really its been team james all along. Haha