No Time To Bleed - Comments

just wanted to point out that you are a very well rounded author. your characters are so mulit-dimensional and you can tell that they have more than just a one track way of thining and looking at things... LOVE IT!!!

AWWWW!!!!! this chapter made me smile... though i do still feel bad for them having to deal with all of that crap, it was a nice moment for jasmine and cece and for jasmine and alex (even though he wasn't there). SUPER excited for the next installment!!!

so haven't been checking my email lately so i had to get caught up on all the action... and WOO IS THERE A LOT OF ACTION!!!!!!! LOVING where the story is going and can't wait to read more. oh and jskars... no wories my attitude is just like that so i feel you on that!!!!!

I thought Max had died. Lol

You up there. My attitude is perfectly fine, if you don't like then piss off. update soon!

Alright so I just read the first chapter. It seems liked it has a lot of potential though I was a little confused at some points because you kept saying she and I was wondering if you were referring to the girl or if you were referring to the main character Jasmine. Honestly her attitude seemed a little cliche. It was well-worked out which I admire though since I know it can be hard to do.

Noo! Why me?

Yay! We're gonna find Ryant and Max :) Me &Alex talked. O.o

It had to happen! A tragedy!

No, how could you? How could you kill william?

Fuck You Lexicon! I must end them. It's the Umbrella Corp. all over again.

It's On Alex!

so, not even kidding i chose to read this story cuz i saw my name in the description, and then WATA YA KNO she black too!!! AND she listens to Rock too... hmmmm...creepy? kinda. but WAY MORE AWESOME!!!!!!!!

lol, so i'm seriously gonna sub cuz i like the storyline and i want to see where you guys take this... i wanna try some zombie stories, but all the other ones i tried seemed too... idk like end-of-the-world-ish and i like stories with the expostion at the beginning to set up the story so that i'm not confused til about half way through the whole story. yea anyway... keep up the good work.

Hahaha Wal- Mart! Alex?

damn you Lion and Uncle Trevor! Your going down, as soon as I beat up Alex.

Noo! Lion? Ryants dad? Let me beat up Alex... Grr!

Is this the part where i get kidnapped? & where's ryant?

I wonder if Jesse's dead... & Ryant im coming for you :)

NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON??? EMPTY PARKING LOT, DEAD BODIES??? something is seriously wrong.

"the price of beauty' lol and i know amanda had to die.