I Will Always Be There For You, Always - Comments

It's cute, and I rather like the idea, but as the other people said, I do think you should continue it, or at least draw it out in a few more chapters, because a lot happened in the first chapter and then it just ended dramatically. It was a bit rushed, but the idea wasn’t like most, so do I give you props for that. :D

And just a tip on the grammar bit, there was really only one thing that I noticed, what that when you put, as an example, “Are you alright?,” you don’t have to put the comma, after the question mark, it’s already ended with a punctuation mark, so there is no need for the comma. Other than that, it was a splendid piece, I enjoyed it. :3

Well done, love.

I love it.... please continue it I want to know if Brian will break Matt's neck :)

Make this a story! PLZ!!!!

i agree with everyone 2 this should be a story!!!!

i agree with everyone else
this should totally be a story! =)

omg, you should continue this.
it's really good.

awww!
that was great can u continue it??
i dont want it to only be a one shot!!

OMFG please make this a story!!!!!!! :D