omg i la la love this story i miss reading ur stories !!! ur such an inspiration !! i am so jelous urbstoriesl get more love then mine :( oh well keep writting beautiful <3
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I'm sort of getting really pissed. This has been going on for like five chapters now... It's always nice to have such a scene extended, but we still have no fucking idea who the goddamn other Alpha Male is and why the fuck he needs Dawn specifically.
when are you going to revel who the woves that got dawn are? I didn't expect matt to find out about baby bryn! That got me by surprise! But I awed on the part about jimmy and leana it made me smile! :) all in all great chapter! Update soon! :D
when are you going to revel who the woves that got dawn are? I didn't expect matt to find out about baby bryn! That got me by surprise! But I awed on the part about jimmy and leana it made me smile! :) all in all great chapter! Update soon! :D
Brian is scary as hell when he's ready to kill...yet i don't feel bad at all for whatever is about to happen to the other wolves trying to take his women. I thought it was very cute that Bryn stopped crying once Jimmy was in arms reach of her and I really hope Matt doesn't try to do anything stupid
Okay question first! Will you reveal more of Jimmy's past since in this chapter and the chapter when he found out about Brian finding his soulmate but she had Matt's daughter, he panicked and he seemed to have had personal experience with the situation that Brian and Dawn are in. Because Jimmy is hellbent of keeping Dawn and Bryn safe from harm. And man Matt is going to get it since he went back and went against Brian's warning. I am dying to know who the other wolves are and I do hope you reveal them soon enough!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow Brian has switched to his other persona: Synyster Fucking Gates! I cannot wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder what's wrong with Layla? Is she sick? Oh that was a surprise Matt saw Bryn in Leana's hand..wonder how he's going to react to seeing his daughter for the first time? I hope Brian will be okay..it unfair that he has to face all these wolves alone, but he has to protect his mate. Amazing update :D
I trust Leana's decision. Bryn was fine in the end anyways. And the whole thing where Jimmy crushed Matt's genitals... it sounded painful. And I'm not even a dude. Post again soon?
I love this story you should really continue this one! i really just wanna beat the shit out of matt and val pff he knew what was gonna happen! can't wait for next chapter!
I pick 2. I loved the long update by the way :) and I reckon my guess was right! I hope so lol. Love that bri has finally caught up. Erm, just a word of advice if you dont mind, some of your spelling was out on this one, like 'hear' instead of 'here'. Hope you don't mind me saying. But great update nonetheless. Update soon. GT x