It Takes a Big Facade to Hide the Cracks - Comments

  • Kelseylynnf

    Kelseylynnf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    Wow...I totally wasn't expecting that!!!!!!
    I am so so so glad you are making a sequel!!!
    I hope she realizes that Katherine is right and she needs to tell him that Alex has a daughter!!
    Can't wait for the sequel to start..already subscribed to it :)
    <3 Kelsey
    December 15th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • n.oxious

    n.oxious (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    =O
    u
    I
    his
    she
    fuck
    she
    u
    ugh
    just forget it
    December 14th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • dannykurily

    dannykurily (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    NO. NO NO NO NO NO.
    I CAN'T BELIEVE JACK FOUND OUT!
    I wanted her to stay with him but she doesn't even deserve him,
    so Team Get-The-Fuck-Out-Of-Here-With-Katherine!

    I love this,
    update sooon <3
    December 13th, 2010 at 06:55pm
  • Kelseylynnf

    Kelseylynnf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    I loved and hated this chapter at the same time lol
    I hated the fact that she had to leave Alex, but at the same time I love her and Jack together as well.
    But Sky seems like she's in love with Alex so she should be with Alex. However, that's going to break Jack's heart and I don't want to see that.
    So as you can see, I have no idea what team i'm on!! totally lost haha.
    I would LOVE if you wrote a sequel though!!!!
    December 12th, 2010 at 02:52am
  • AJ Vengeance Roars

    AJ Vengeance Roars (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    team Alex but get the fuck out of there lol
    PLEASE DO A SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!
    xoxox
    December 12th, 2010 at 02:35am
  • Arizona.Beauty.

    Arizona.Beauty. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    sequal!!!!!! thiss is just too good to finissh! xD xx
    December 11th, 2010 at 09:49pm
  • n.oxious

    n.oxious (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    -_-
    I hve nothing to say to u miss
    humph
    December 11th, 2010 at 07:29pm
  • mrgn94cb

    mrgn94cb (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Team get the fuck out!
    Cant choose between Jack and Alex!
    You should def. have a sequal!!!!
    Love this story!!!!!!! Update soon!
    December 11th, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • Kelseylynnf

    Kelseylynnf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    OMG!!! I bet it's Jack that opened the door!!!!!
    Loved the chapter!! :)
    And I LOVE ATL's new Christmas song....i have it on repeat!! lol
    I am also very excited because All Time Low is coming to my city during their spring tour on April 6th!!!!! I haven't seen them live before so i'm stoked!! :)
    Update soon!!!
    <3 Kelsey
    December 10th, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • n.oxious

    n.oxious (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    dude
    I flipped when I found out ATL had a new so g
    how'd u find out about it???
    and oh shit
    but anyways
    I all about ran to the computer when I saw
    like shit
    it's awesome
    my heart is like rack g and fluttering right now :3
    December 10th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • n.oxious

    n.oxious (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    I liked the video
    cheered me up after tht chapter
    so now tht I'm in a good mood
    I'm gonna leave
    b4 I start yelling
    and plotting ur death
    LOVE YOU
    BYE!!!!!!!
    December 7th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • Kelseylynnf

    Kelseylynnf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    I absolutley hate what Alex is doing to Sky!!!!
    He should just tell her...i have a feeling that keeping it a secret is going to do more damage.
    I feel bad for Sky too because I can tell that it hurts her that Alex has a new "girlfriend"
    Loved the update!!!
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    <3 Kelsey
    December 6th, 2010 at 11:09pm
  • Arizona.Beauty.

    Arizona.Beauty. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    AMAZINGGG(: update soon pleasee! xD
    December 2nd, 2010 at 05:06pm
  • n.oxious

    n.oxious (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    YES
    YES YES
    YOU SHUD DO ANOTHER FANFIC!!!
    nd omg
    holy shit
    Alex was her first time??
    man
    I wished they wudve gotten together instead
    he fanfic shud be about Ronnie Radke ;)
    bc he's smexy
    but
    if u rly want to
    u shud rly do an ATL fanfic
    preferably
    a zack fanfic
    bc he duznt get enough credit
    but then again
    rain hardly EVER gets Candice
    but he duz almost always hve a gf
    bu yeah
    either Ronnie Radke
    or Zacl Merrick
    December 2nd, 2010 at 05:10am
  • avengedcaitlyn

    avengedcaitlyn (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Btw: of course you should do another ATL fan-fic.
    amazing stuff you know.
    haha, comment three ;)
    December 2nd, 2010 at 04:16am
  • avengedcaitlyn

    avengedcaitlyn (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I really hope they count even though they're alll three from me. haha.
    anyways, amazing story I love it! Update pleeeaase
    December 2nd, 2010 at 04:15am
  • avengedcaitlyn

    avengedcaitlyn (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    You posted chapter five twice :P
    & I am half tempted to comment three times so I can get the next chapter. I'm going to do it.
    December 2nd, 2010 at 04:15am
  • Kelseylynnf

    Kelseylynnf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    For some reason, I just love Alex and Sky together. (even though they're not really together lol).
    I feel like she can turn to him for anything since he knows everything about her.
    I also love the flashbacks...it makes the reader understand more about Sky's past and more about her and Alex's relationship. I feel like you're doing a great job of making this story come to life :)
    To answer your question, yes i think you should write another ATL fanfic because that's basically all i read on here haha. :)
    And thank you so much for the profile comment! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story :) I hope you enjoy it! I haven't been able to update it in a while because i've been so busy with school and sorority stuff..hopefully i will be able to update during Christmas break :)
    <3 Kelsey
    December 2nd, 2010 at 03:55am
  • Kelseylynnf

    Kelseylynnf (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    I love this story!! I subscribed :)
    And I'm guessing the reason why Alex was crying was because he really does love her, but she doesn't think he does.
    Sky shouldn't deny her feelings anymore..I believe it's going to do more harm than good if she keeps on fighting these feelings for Alex and continuing to be with Jack. Plus, she still hasn't told Jack the entire truth yet.
    I love how Alex was there for her when she needed him :)
    Anyways, i love this story and hope you update soon!
    btw, I am currently writing a story called "Don't Ever Lose Hope" and would love if you could read it. you don't have 2 if you don't want 2..just thought i'd let ya know :)
    December 2nd, 2010 at 01:09am
  • smileadayxx

    smileadayxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    ah well, I was wrong=/
    amazing story, I love alex, but Jack is her bf...shit is going to go down when he finds out!
    and yes, I am shamelessly comment-bribing for more updates:D
    November 28th, 2010 at 05:05pm