It Takes a Big Facade to Hide the Cracks - Comments

guessing that little 'object' is a razor....
This is a really, really well written story!

Ahh I don't know who to vote for! haha
I mean I love Jack, but I think Alex is better for her to be honest. He knows/understands her better then Jack does. But we'll see!

I think he was crying because he was heartbroken to see her with Jack again.

Amazing story so far! Can't wait for more <3

I really wish she could see it thoughh.

He loves her. It's obvious!

Was he crying because he love her, and he had for a long time?
Idk how to feel about Alex..
I think she should pick Jack in the end though. I don't wanna see him hurt :(
<3

I think Alex was crying
bc
he was rly heartbroken wen he saw her with jack
and he thought tht mb just mb
she feeler the same way about him bc he loved her
nd THT mb just mb
after tht fight between roxy and jack he cud hve a chance with her
thts why I think he was crying
he rly loves her
it's so obvious
why can't she see it??

loving the story so farr! but omg it's a hard choice to choose from Alex and Jack, their both hot lmao. update soon please?(:

oh shit
I can't
icant take it anymore
ALEX!!!!
IM ON YOUR TEAM!!!
IM SORRY JACK!!!!!!
sniff sniff
I feel bad for her
nd jack
nd I felt so sry for Alex
u can tell tht he rly loves her
sniff sniff
update soon please!!!

IDK
But you should...
Tell me???
Soon???

ARHG THIS IS AMAZING
I love Alex and all but I'm Team JBB on this one, <33
Sorry Alex!
Update soooon please? :)

loved it! team AWG!

D:
alright
I love Alex
but this is
no
I'm on team jack this time
sigh
I can't believe
ugh
update soon please

love'd it can't wait for an update

no
nonononononononono
somebody's gonna get hurt
somebody is gonna get hurt aren't they
I don't
no
she can't do this to jack
no
U SAID NOBODY WD GET HURT!!!!!!
Noel definitely doesnt say tht
ugh
update soon please!!!

SHES A WHORE WHORE WHORE WHORE WHOOOORE!
no she's not.. she loves them both just in different ways.
awwhie, i don't want jack to get hurt </3
update soon please.

love it cant wait to see everything unfold.

WOW.
this is intense..
I have no idea who it's going to be, update and tell me ?
:D

umm wow
this is good
I hunk it's gonna be Alex Gaskarth definitely and Jack Barakat
tht are in his story :)
am I right??
I'm right aren't I?
oh just tell me I'm right already!
haha
anywho
I like this
update soon please

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I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!
I stole this stories virginity!!!!!!
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!