I Need an Angel and I Think It's You - Comments

THIS CHAPTER, OMG, IT'S AMAZING!
it's my favorite one so far! First of all, I never knew that about Ollala, and I felt
so bad for her! I really like the detail you put into it, and the emotion, it touched
me (don't mean to sound cheesy there) and I'm glad they had a heart to heart.
Eli will forever be adorable and amazing. My cousin likes Diary of a Wimpy Kid xD
I really hope Sera and Ollala's friendship/sistership don't get ruined, especially
after the heart to heart. I think I might understand though, why Fernando kissed
her, but I'm going to find that out soon :) Can't wait for the next update!

omg didn't expect that to happen but aww
now I get ollala a bit more
great update

Hold the phone - is Nando jealous or something? Maybe he is acting like the older brother, but I don't think so! There's something brewing in that pot.

Can't wait for Miami!!

Aww Nando is so cute! I love how he's so protective of him :) I'm warming up to Liam more, as
well. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm waiting for her kiss with Liam (if it ever happens) xD

aww love it nando especially how nando got all protective

Love the update honey. I love how Fernando got all protective

You know I love! Though Nando's protectiveness seems to be overriding the older-brotherly-ness now. Well played!

Yoland is all knowing! It scares me when people are like that. It's like some weird mind-powers... I don't think she will, but it would be some great/interesting confliction to come about if she did!

Eli, again, is too cute! And I feel like Liam is about to start a storm with Fernando if he finds out Sera is hanging out with him.

Patiently waiting for the next! ^_^

Eli is so adorable, it just melted my heart to read the abandoned to die part. Yolanda's the coolest! I'd love to have her for a friend! Somehow, I doubt she'd tell Olalla about Sera's crush.

Love the update honey adn I cant wait

Yolanda is such a sweetheart! I wouldn't mind having her around, she seems like someone
I'd get along with :) As much as I love Sera, I don't want her to act on her feelings and get
between Fernando and Ollala! Eli! I love this guy, it broke my heart when he thought he was
abandoned. He's just so loveable and adorable! UPDATE SOON!!

What is Ollala hiding from Nando??!! I'm all caught up, and I'm loving it :)
I do hope Ollala and Sera's relationship get better. Liam is an interesting character,
he's seems like a total hottie, and I'm interested in knowing how/if they're relationship
will develop. Update soon!

What's Liam's secrets?! I wanna know! I don't trust him one bit, but if I was Sera, I would've fallen for him a while ago.

I really want Sera's and Olalla's relationship to intensify! I don't like a lot of drama, but I would love to see how that would out.

And I love how Yolanda reminds me of a typical Spanish family that are always so welcoming! And Grecia - so cute!

Me like. Liam's kinda cool. But! What's his secret?????

Love the update honey

Poor Sera! Even though its a really good update, it made me really sad. Hope you can update some more soon!

I really like it. I hope you update soon :D

Love it. Cant wait for more

I so wasn't expecting that. It was awesome. I mean, I just thought he was childish and all. Anyway, I found it refreshing that you didn't make your characters perfect, and that they had some flaws in them. I don't think most people would make their characters have down syndrome. Anyway, this was a wonderful surprise, because I wasn't expecting this at all. I'm not sure what Sera has yet, but I want to know what it is! Also, I hope she gets better! I really like your character development on all of your characters. I like Sera, she's so strong and she's protective of her brother.

I was expecting as dramatic as lymphoma the more I read on about Sera. I was just like in my head, "Something like cancer."

Eli I wasn't expecting at all. I'm guessing he has a mild form of it in the story since Nando wasn't aware of it at all.

Anways, very well done! Can't wait!