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I only just discovered your story, and I was up until waaaay past the early hours of the morning reading it!! I think it's absolutely fantastic - the story is original and has amazing characters. I love Adam, just saying ;) he's my favourite character by far. Arta as well is a fantastic character, even though she's evil and so easy to hate! Anyway, I hope you update again soon. I'm greatly looking forward to it! :)

ahaha! i loves your authors comment haha. but yeah i enjoyed this point of view to. its really haleping the hole story piece together! So proud of you :) you are excellent.. keep it coming please

I felt like it was boring. It needed to be there to explain things, and I'm glad it got the message across!! But I wished I could have done something a little more exciting. You are not failing! You've just been held back! Is it a time issue? Awww thanks!!! I'm glad you like it!! :D <3
To Abi; <3s right back at 'ya!

<3

Abi.. seriously woman you have one mahoofus head :P Jokes.. you are an awesome editor and you guys are my best friends... and i love chapter 23.. why were you worried? its awesome.. really explains what is going on.. it fits awesomely... and i know it was meant to depress me but i still didnt want it to happen :/ but that means your an excellent writer.. which we know <3 i am failing at writing... this past year has been ridiculous for me.. i used to write all of the time.. but im proud of you guys and i ADORE your story <3

Omigosh, Laura, I'm sooooo happy!!! That mahoofus (lol! I love your word!) comment just made my day!!! :D <3 I'm glad Adam is you favorite-he's mine, too! Claire shows up in a few chapters when we take a break from Adam's story cause everyone's forgetting about her!! D: Yeah, I'm sorry, but the thing about Erik is MEANT to depress you!! *hugs* I apologize! It is terrible!! Thank you for subscribing!!! <3 Just talk to me on Facebook anytime and we can discuss away!!!
Thank you, Abi! :D *giggles* Yay! Fresh air!! :D *hugs* <3 <3 <3 You guys just made me so happy~!!!

XD This Editor does not take on crudy work! Kaitlyn's stories are so amazing because they are something you NEVER find, and I think that Mibba needs a breath of fresh air!

Laura never doubt my ability to find amazing writers!

Kaitlyn just happens to be one of my best friends, okay, lies, my best friend, next to alex and you :)

OHH MY GOD!!! How come you never told me how epic your writing is? i mean it's sooooo different to Abi's ODL but im super hooked.. like ridiculously haha.. this is such a different story compared to what im used to reading.. but i love it all the same.. i do like Erik but Adam is definitley my fav character.. i love claire too and i miss her.. when will we hear from Claire again? can't wait to see what happens and ERKI IS DEAD? i so hope not.. i like him alot.. but if he is i guess every story needs some kind of tragedy.. my heart dropped when she said he was dead. i thought he'd just been kidnapped!!! ohh well ive subscribed and you have a MAHOOFUS (my word for massive) comment off me:) need to discuss xD

it was great :)

Well... How bad was it?

XD not really

LOL! Yeah, you do! ;D What?! Really?! I could have sworn you'd read that!!

Now I really need to edit the Fanfiction... after reading the end of chapter 13, *YOU ONLY LET ME EDIT THE FIRST 9 PAGES XD*

Omigosh!!, NixxyBlack, you have no idea what this means to me!!! *wipes her tears* Thank you so much! *runs off to cry from happiness*

Oh my Word!
Absolutly falling in LOVE with Adam and Clare! And I think I actually started crying when we found about Erik...I was devistated!

The cliff hanger was evil though...Now clinging on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!

I have to say as well your writing style is really good! You had me drawn in from maybe the second sentance of the first chapter.

I can deffinetly say, Hooked!

Nixxy

Awww! You're the best!
You know my family. We're Mormon. Family is, like, huge with us.

It is extremely moving :) I can't believe that you are in trouble for not having family time.... weird rule XD

Really? Is it moving? Aaaah!! *hugs!!!* <33333 Thank you!!! :D

I think I am crying, from chapter 11 <3 and I <3 you too, :)

Really people, I would not be the Editor of a crappy story, so if your reading this, READ THE STORY!