Catch Me - Comments

I really like this. like a lot. I enjoy the mysteriousness, yet gentleness of this story. it's really sweet.
I enjoyed the old woman in the beginning, i love old people in stories in general. anyway, I really love this. Twas very romantic.

This was a very cute and sweet story. I enjoyed it a lot, and I loved all the characters. I was glad that she had opened up to Danny. In the 4th to last biggest paragraph, you say He fearlessness, and I think you mean The fearlessness. That was about the only mistake I saw. :)

Cute, very cute.
I enjoyed how mysterious, yet how open the girl seemed.
The plot was lovely.
Wonderful job.
I really enjoyed it :)

this was lovely.
it was cute and romantic and i loved the ending a lot.

That was pretty good. It kept my interest. I liked the elderly woman at the beginning. I love old people like that. They are absolutely the best. I liked how you showed how they met and showed that he actually cared. Truthfully this is the opposite of what I thought it was about, so a big thumbs up because it was better. I'm glad that she opened up to him and in the end she wanted him to catch her. Oh so romantic! It was really good. Out of five stars you get fifty. ^.^