December 8th, 2010 at 02:27am
That first Chapter was mindblowing, and I could picture TOP moving through all of that, much like he did when he starred in Into The Fire, and his character had to go through that. And....that was a prologue right?
It...it sounded like he was about to die, and that he got shot in the leg, and then the arm.The rest of the chapters that follow are marvelous. I love that GD is the one that puts up the paper lanterns, and that he makes paper dragons (How appropriate.
).Plus your writing is so beautiful. <3 The descriptions are so fluid-like, and you paint imagery so beautifully.
I just can't get over your writing style. It's gorgeous.
This was one of my favorite parts:
Jiyong dipped his knees and bent forward, so his eyes caught Seunghyun’s downturned gaze. “The lanterns told me,” he whispered, resting a thin finger on his light pink smile as if telling a secret. “They like to talk a lot,” he informed the other man. “Not much to do all day besides talk. They tell me lots of secrets. They tell me lots about you too. They like you.”
So cuuuuuute.Though I only think of everyone in Big Bang as bros for life (
), I'mma still read this. Cause it's beautiful. <3 
You have good descriptions
this is the kind of thing you don`t want to stop reading
I keep reading because I want to find out what`s going on(:
I love how the secound chapter is written quite different then the first though I like the first too
Yeah, I only read the first two chapters, I will read more if you really want me to