Zachary can see Jeremy! I love the way Eliza stood up to her mom. I think Addie's character is kind of intresting and it's a great stpry overall. Btw, you're an amazing writer.
I am so so so sorry I haven't read this! I've just finished reading all the chapters. My computer broke and I've been reading on my iPod and it just came up that this story had been updated so I just came to read and boy have I missed a lot. I'm sorry I didn't read sooner. This story is amazing, I love the originality of it.
Oh gosh, i feel so bad for Jeremy. You made the chapter so full of emotion that I actually felt like I knew what Jeremy was going through; I could just imagine all that pain and guilt.