Life, Death, and Strange Encounters - Comments

LOVE IT!!!
im glad ur chapters r gonna be longer
cant wait for more!!!!!!

Finally they kissed at last :)
Brilliant chapter :)

i really love this story!!
i hope u add lots more chapters soon!

Yay chapter :)

:) I like your story, o don't think i'm being mean, or hating on it (LOL)
But i can honestly say that the length of each chapter is about 4-6 small paragraphs, and i think you could go through all your chapters and combine them to make fewer (although ALOT LONGER) chapters instead of having ALOT of REALLY SMALL chapters. I'm almost tempted to wait for 3 or so updates from you before getting back into reading your story just so that it feels like i'm actually reading a story instead of a paragraph of a chapter.

Please don't think i'm being mean or haing on you, but seriously, i'm kind of losing interest because the "chapters" are so short. Or perhaps if you want to, you could just wait a while longer as you write more for the story so that the chapters can be longer.

Otherwise, good story! :)

hey
this is a really good story
i hope u updare soon!!

omg i really love your story...but there is just one thing thats bugging me...shes a model and full of doubt that shes beautiful??but im still addicted^^

Yay updates :)

i still think you need WAY more comments :) and.....im completly in love with your story :)

Nail-emergency xD

Thanks, everyone!

lovely update love

Yay chapter. :]

this is great you deserve way more comments :) update i guess it sorta to soon to say that but pleease

Not bad at all love

Yay ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!
Love, love, love love this story
and I can't wait forthe next chapter!!:)

I love this story!!!
Merry Christmas!!!!

Thank you. :)

its really good!!
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this is really good!!!
update soon!!!
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