i really like this story, it's good because the plot if different and nearly everyone writes the same kinda thing now (: your a really good writer, update soon!
If I was more awake I would write more, but seeing as I'm falling asleep, cuz of my lack of sleep and vast energy waste through out my life, I can not think properly and I'm ramballing about silly things, that I don't know of... But I think that this story is awesome, and it hurts a little when you take forever to update, but I can and will survive. Alright, I can't stay awake any longer. I'm going to go to sleep now, and if I remember on my next pause in life, I will review/comment once again, so that you know that you have atleast one loyal reader out there, one that takes away they're precious sleep for they're dedication to read an awesome story...