:) I like your story, o don't think i'm being mean, or hating on it (LOL) But i can honestly say that the length of each chapter is about 4-6 small paragraphs, and i think you could go through all your chapters and combine them to make fewer (although ALOT LONGER) chapters instead of having ALOT of REALLY SMALL chapters. I'm almost tempted to wait for 3 or so updates from you before getting back into reading your story just so that it feels like i'm actually reading a story instead of a paragraph of a chapter.
Please don't think i'm being mean or haing on you, but seriously, i'm kind of losing interest because the "chapters" are so short. Or perhaps if you want to, you could just wait a while longer as you write more for the story so that the chapters can be longer.
omg i really love your story...but there is just one thing thats bugging me...shes a model and full of doubt that shes beautiful??but im still addicted^^
im glad ur chapters r gonna be longer
cant wait for more!!!!!!