Melted Chocolate Hearts - Comments

i may get annoying...
update? please?

so i just found this story and i really love it so far.
i am very intrigued to see where this goes please update again soon :)

YAYA! you updated!
who in this crazy world could charlie be? hmm...
o me word! wht does you wont be yourself mean? who else is rave gonna be?!
can't wait for more! ^ ^

update please?
who could Charlie be? whts the story with all the lies? im so confused...
i love this story!

I'm down on my knees beggin you to please update, your writing is amazing and the plot is awesome!

srry i didnt comment on the last chap...i loves this story though..
hmm..wht has gotten into Avan? and wht is tht lady hiding? hmm...
so many questions...can't wait for more!
^ ^
i just love Rave!

I forgot mibba existed for some time, and I come back to find two updates WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Can't wait to find out who charlie is!!!!

woooooow MINDFUCK!
haahaa i just started reading,
but this story is really good
and the ending of the last chapter
was a complete and utter
MINDFUCK! O.O
I loved it though!! =3

What the hell? Who the fuck is Charlie? Well that certainly surprised me.

Charlie?
Charlie?
whut
charlie
whutwhutwhut
That was my favorite part...when you completely blew my mind with 'Charlie.'
.-. what is goin on.

Aww
I
Love
Rave,he's so cuuute ><
Update more,yes??
;)
<3

Heyy!!
you should really update soon
cause I love your story
:D!
And hmm... yeah. Just update soon.
And I'll give you a cookie.!

This is a really great story, I can't wait for the next update!!

this story really catches my attention. keep up! :D

It is so goooooood.

Love this story.
Can't wait for the story to continue (:

it seems mister king has some issues too..
aww poor rave...
love this!
^ ^

I wasn't sure if I would like this but I do! I love it. Can't wait for more!!!

YAY! updates!
aww Rave....hmm..is he playing him? i must know..
i LOVE this story!

love it so far can't wait to read more