Melted Chocolate Hearts - Comments

Yay, an update! :3

I comment all the time! Because I love youuuu<333
And Rave
and mostly just the whole story in general ^_^
Eheh
Anyway
I totally understand
So, take your time if you have to.

as long as u update im good ^ ^
love this story with all my heart..!

I seriously love this story. ^-^ Keep updating. ;D

This is amazing. I'm surprised it doesn't have many comments yet. It's a totally unique concept and I can't wait to see more of Rave's personality :)

I'm glad you're back and planning on updating. ;o

yay! an update!
ohh so...hmm...
i must have more! thhis is becoming my drug...its all ur fault for making such a good story!
haha i love this!

HAHAH
So
I still love Rave
He's so cute even though he's a teensy bit evil.
<3

I feel like a kid on Christmas morning every time I get an email message from Mibba. I can't wait to open it and see what story updates are inside. And when I found out that it was this story... Well, my day instantly became a tad bit better. :}

This side of Rave is... intriguing. I like it.

i see why u love rave...^ ^
i love this story!
cant wait for more!
there should be a chap in Raves pov..one day in the future..

I like your picturess. ;]
That's how I imagined them, too. O:
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1) FUCK YES. I love Rave. So much.
2) Eheheh yeah it's entertaining. Annette annoys me =P

Rave. Is. Just. So. Cute.
I literally get all excited when he's part of this.

Update soon!

Oohhmyyygodd. I need MORE. This is amazing. You're a fantastic writer. I found this gem today, and I couldn't walk away from it. It is one of the best stories I've read on Mibba in mooonnnnnttthhhhssss. Please, please, please continue writing. I cannot wait for an update! :D

Rave definitely seems like a character I'll grow to love. :}
Do you think you could put up character images?
I know some people don't like to, but it is always interesting to see how they look in the author's eyes.
Anywayyy, update ASAP, yeaah? ;D

this did not suck...it was great!
aww...poor little Rave..
can't wait for more!

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RAVE IS SO CUTE.
*continues flipping out*
Now you have to update, mkay?
<333

found this right now and i couldnt stop reading...its so very interesting!
can't wait for more!

^_^
I want him to meet Rave already!
Hopefully next chapter since she asked him if he wanted to.

Update soon, mkay?

This is good.
The main character's personality kind of reminds me of Sherlock Holmes (from the TV series)...
Anyways
Keep up the good work <3

This has been really interesting so far. :3 Not only is it written beautifully, but the main character has such a strange personality if you look at in a view of other stories. I simply can't wait for the future chapters.

It's greatly writen; I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter: )