Wildfires - Comments

Damn my hideous italics. o-o

I know you just updated, but do you think you can write another chapter? For me?
lol, I'm so in love with this story. The structure; the format in poetic form... Simply <i>enticing.</i>
And you choice of words- <i>diction</i>- evokes a sort of bittersweet streak to it.
<3 love itt!

This is so awesome! But Anna seems like a jerky friend who probably needs a Twinkee shoved down her throat ;3

I love this. A lot. <3

Ahh I missed two updates!! I don't check my email for days and you've updated, this just made my day. I get so sad when I read this but not in the bad way its just I wish she could see herself as the beautiful person I'm sure she is. I feel like she is a real person and not just a made up one, my heart truly does go out to her. I cannot wait to read more. Update when you can :)

Niiice. ^_^ Can't wait for more.

This was just another amazing update. I feel like at this point she's lost who she was and now she can't find it. I know that doesn't make sense but in my mind it does. Lol. I just felt like she was sad and lost in this chapter, I can't wait to read more. :)

It's very rare that I subscribe to stories because I am known as a picky reader. You left a comment on my journal entry telling me to read your story and I have became interested. I wrote a poem about Anorexia for my English class once. I like this story you should keep it up.

Okay well this is like the 2nd time I've read this story :) It's really great and well written...Update soon? :)

Consider me subscribed

That’s what I tell myself as I
gethurt thinnereveryone everyI daylove.
This cluster (it took out all the slashes, aha) of words just broke my heart, dearie.
You've got such a way with words.<3

What’s your name again?
Oh, of course, you’re Iris.
You’re the girl everyone will be jealous of.

Oh dear.<3
I can see where she's coming from in this chapter. It breaks my heart all the more, you know?
If someone can relate you know you're an amazing writer, aha. :) <3

I only read the first two chapters (hence the few quotes) but I wanted to let you know that you're doing an amazing job with this.<3 So amazing in fact, and because you're an amazing writer, that I'm subbing and will continue reading and hope to comment on all the chapters. (: <3

Love the new update. I'm so intrigued because Iris seeks solace from "my sweet Ana". Every time I read one of your chapters I feel like I understand what it's like in the mind of someone with an eating disorder a little more. And Ryne. I've never heard that name before, and I'm excited to learn more about him. Anyway, I hope you update soon.

Hey there, I like your story. It is really good. I love the way the chapters are short yet they really get through very nicely, not many writers can actually get that right but I think you do it perfectly.

Keep up the good work!

Thank you for updating and saving me from a horrible day. This was so amazingly good, I love it. Keep on updating and doing a fantastic job, :)

This is really good ! I really want to read more , so please update soon.
I`m going to subscribe.
Xxoo,
Bridgette

Wow.... just wow. That was just amazing the format was amazing. I love the way Ellen Hopkins writes and I love the way this story is. I wish I could give you a better comment but words are escaping me right now. This story is just so amazing please keep up the good work. :) I'm subscribing.

I love the format you chose, I think it's really fitting with the story and helps the flow. I also enjoy your use of italics, underlining, and bold. I'd say be careful though, since I know some people might be bugged by it.

The idea of Ana is intriguing. It's scary to image a little voice in your head controlling your life. You can see how Iris seems to trust her but is wary of everyone else. I've seen too many people "translate" things like Iris translates her mom's instructions. Gahh. There are so many things I'd like to point out and tell you how amazing they are, but I must be sleeping soon. I'd just like to say this has quickly become one of my favorite stories on mibba :)

I've already subscribed.

I think this story is really interesting. :D I love the format and how it emphasizes certain words. Keep writing! :)

i love the way you format your stories, like sometime when you only have one word on each line.
and i just love 'food is the enemy'
:)

yay!!! new story!!!!
YOU GOT MAD AT ME
when i didnt tell you that i was thinking
of writing a story&&&its alright
when you write a new one&&dont tell me????
ahhhhhh EVIL!!!! YOUR EVIL!!!! =)

this sound really interesting :)
and the introduction was amazing
keep it up :)