Ok, firstly, I think this story is great and that u should keep it =)
One thing though: change the short description. When a person reads the short description, they want to know what they're about to read. Your short description doesn't really tell much, which will result in less readers than what this story deserves.
Ok, firstly, I think this story is great and that u should keep it =)
One thing though: change the short description. When a person reads the short description, they want to know what they're about to read. Your short description doesn't really tell much, which will result in less readers than what this story deserves.
Umm, that makes sense right?
Otherwise, consider me subscribed! =D