I liked this update. Their was hardly any talking at all, and the story content was full and meaningful, you made it seem effortless to write, and I enjoyed it. i also missed you quite a lot, way to forget your user name! Sunny-Lee <3
Favourite Line: “Come here, I need to show you something,” he gestured. I leaned in and he pulled me into a hug. I didn’t even try to struggle.
“What-are-you-doing,” I said, speaking sternly.
“This is called a hug,” he said into my shoulder, “and I don’t think you’ve had one of these since you were like, five.” He let me go.
Because it was greatly amusing, and cute and thoughtful all at once. Msn, i'm like sweating, who has soup i the summer? Apparently I do... I liked this update, in fact, i like every time you update. Do it more often. :) Sunny-Lee <3
Awhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *breathes* That was completely adorable! Especially...wait... it was jsut cute. And i loved it :) I don't even know what i liked best, but i did. :) Sunny-Lee <3
I'm starting to find her past more interesting than what's currently going on, lol. &My friend did that, but she left a comment. I left her cell phone number and invited people to send her rapist/threatening texts. [=
Oh wow, nice friend... just calls you and tells you she hated your new chapter... i liked that one, in fact it was one of my favourite.s I also enjoyed this one quite a lot... you added a bit to the plot, changing our mind sets to something of magic. Well done. :) Sunny-Lee <3
I agree with above ^ This has to be one of the best stories on here and I love it. I condem you to post another chapter quickly! This is your punishment for shortness!
This defiantly has to be my favorite story here on Mibba. I'm a new subscriber and I just read every single chapter. I absolutely love this story. Keep up the amazing job.
oh, the negative feedback wasn't on here. it was actually my best friend, she called me and was like, "uh good news or bad news? bad news? i hate your new chapter." haha.