This is beautiful. The way you wrote it, it sounds as though it could be a song as well as a story, and your writing flows so amazingly. It's so abstract, too - I like how you left it to the imagination what the specifics were. The tone change near the end from sweet to bitter was interesting as well, and I don't know if you rhymed certain things on purpose, but that was hella awesome too. It's really poetic and just...beautiful. Amazing job. :D
Whoa! You've got some talent! That's amazing. I love how it rhymes every once in a while. And that it's 100 words exactly. The layout is really beautiful as well. Well done!
Oh my god! I love it! <3 Ashley you really out did yourself with this story! ^-^ But but all your work is perfect and amazing! <3 Love ya! ~Your bestie
Oh, I love deceiving pieces - when they seem pretty and sweet at the beginning and end with a completely different and dark emotion. Just as with Stolen, the imagery in Puppet is stunning.
Once again, thank you for entering, and wonderful job on this!
It's so abstract, too - I like how you left it to the imagination what the specifics were. The tone change near the end from sweet to bitter was interesting as well, and I don't know if you rhymed certain things on purpose, but that was hella awesome too. It's really poetic and just...beautiful. Amazing job. :D