Sweetheart, Just Be Real - Comments

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Okay so this is adorable and I love it and I'm addicted and yeahh
Update please :D

Hahaha okay so I'm totally in love with this story <3
I was just excited to find someone else on this site who knows about Four Lokos.xD

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I'm half-way through the first chapter, but I wanted to say something:
HELL YES! FOUR LOKOS! <33

I'm gonna go and finish reading now xD

Awww, well aren't they just the cutest couple (; Oh, and btw you posted two of the same chapters ;D But yeah can't wait for 14/15 ? haha

Wait what do you mean John lied to her? What did he lie about? And awww they finally said I Love You! ;D <3

Ooooh, he's ganna hurt her! I just now it, its like he jinxed it. When he said he wouldn't, its like BAM! their future changed and now he WILL hurt her.

Tooooo cute :)

So so so so so so so ADORABLE.
Gosh i love you!!! haha
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Oh my the L word is a pretty big deal.
Let's hope they can stick to it.

love it!!!!!!!

I absolutely love the story so far <3 . Cannot wait for you to make chapter 12. Please don't make Kimmy and John break up D;

Moreeee puhlease :)

Awww that's so cute. I love love love love love this story!!
Please update :D

That is so sad!!!!! I am almost in tears!!!!! Why did you end it there!?!?!? Where is her brother he should have done something.....Grr.....sad face. But I got to say I don't think it was awkardly writen, actually I think it's pretty good writing. Keep up the good work. And UPDATE!

Your right it was weird but a funny weird which is good. I liked it. Except for when he yelled at her. I like the ending though but also didn't because John didn't hear it but I guess it's hard for her to admit she has those feelings. Amazing job though. I like the part when they are hunting for a Christmas tree the best. I've always wanted to do that too but we always use a fake one :( kinda boring!! But good chapter. Can't wait for the next update :)

best.story.ever <33

so she LOVES HIM?!