Sweetheart, Just Be Real - Comments

Aww adorable :D they need to get together like... now.

They will be together in no time at all...

John totally wants to mack with her..

Ahahha yes the hints are kinda obvious haha. Just a question in this was does he have brothers or not? Just so I don't get confused. And wow kimmy needs to just come to the conclusion that she likes him which is why she gets butterflies in her stomach. Plus she's kinda putting him down by not showing him that she likes him. But besides those things love it. I don't think there is one negative comment I can give. Love the story so far. Hopefully she figures out she likes him before he gives up. Sorry I tend to jump to things in my paragraph that's the reason I don't have a good grade in English. Love love love it can't wait for the next one :)

I aaaaam! [; The whole intending to love and loving thing (: Imma smart one no? xD

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Just read the first three chapters, and this story is amazing so far (:

I don't see why kimmy is getting annoyed by John flirting with her but okay. I like how John is trying to be subtle about it. Like at the end where he says "like you" even though she doesn't like it he's subtle about showing her he likes her. Even if it's pretend or not. Good chapter though. I have a feeling this will be a good story just like the other ones you've written. Your truely an amazing writer :) can't wait for the next chapter :)

awww so cute :DDD

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Aww John is so cute :D

Wow that's kinda sad. Well that's like me too but im a freshman that's never been kissed. But I don't mind. I don't think that John will only do it to help kimmy with her reputation I think he's going to do it because he likes her. And John shouldve wrapped his arms around her when he saw she was cold

great soo far(: xD update soon please?! X

OMG I LOVE THIS ALREADY :D

Eeeeeeeeepers! This is an exciting new story! :D I was actually gonna ask if you could do something about Halvo (since I met him a week ago and still am starstruck) and this includes Halvo so YAY! :D I like this story, I feel its ganna be good. (: How could this not have any comments? :O Maybe cause its new...oh well. GREAT STORY! :D You're awesome. JSYK. [: