September 20th, 2011 at 03:31am
I really liked the lyrics you put at the beginning of every chapter, I just think that made them that extra bit better. I noticed as the chapters got nearer to the end, the picture at the top changed. I found that it kinda made the chapter as to whatever picture was up there. :)
This is quite a cute little story, I liked how she had the conflict within her throughout the whole story, no matter whether she was doing her dancing or going out with the other guy, Zach was always in her mind. That was cute, in a way.
I found this really quite good. :)
:D :-D :) :-)