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  • iloveatl

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    "Bitch, I'll stab you in the neck!" Hahahahhaha(:
    February 5th, 2011 at 03:41am
  • carolineorowley

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    heyy, i still LOVE it!!!<3
    the ending was adorable(:
    i hope u get 10 stars:D
    January 25th, 2011 at 11:21pm
  • sdill

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    Hello :) I haven't commented in such a long time! I've been so busy with my own story and so many other things that I haven't had time to finish reading chapter 20. First of all, I'd just like to say that overall this story was kind of perfect. It was not only written beautifully, but it kept me, and everyone else, interested. Some stories that I read on here are all the same, and they start to get boring and monotonous. What I liked about your story is that it was different from everyone elses. Most people have the main guy mess up, and then the main girl run back into his arms. In yours, Audrey was resistant, and I loved it. Aside from the whole story, I really loved the last chapter. I could picture it as a movie (lol). Although I was kinda hoping Zach would suprise her at the recital or something, I could never think of a better way to end it than with the sock. Honestly, you are such a fantastic writer and when I'm writing, I kind of look up to you in a way. I would really LOVE to read more from you so I'm going to read the sequel now, so expect another comment. :)
    January 12th, 2011 at 05:17pm
  • iloveatl

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    i love the ending (: i'm so glad she ended up with Zach. I wanted that to happen all along! I'm going to go start reading beautiful soul now & p.s. you need to write more of the Alex Gaskarth fanfic perty please!
    January 5th, 2011 at 02:54am
  • r.tistique

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    I love love love love this story! I sat down and read it straight through and can't wait to read the sequel! Amazing work!!!!
    January 1st, 2011 at 01:56am
  • Blah.Blah.Blah.Brey

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    I love this story! Definitely write more PLEASE! :D
    December 31st, 2010 at 05:26am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I was out of town so I JUST read your story the millisecond my phone worked with Internet just thought you should know that and that I legit LOVE it!!!!!! No joke LOVE I am happy her and Zach ended up together :) thanks for telling me about your sequel gonna read it now, and comment of course
    December 31st, 2010 at 03:11am
  • adublovahh

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    holy mother of chicken.
    I loved this.
    please let me know if there's a sequal?
    :D
    December 30th, 2010 at 04:47am
  • forever.yours

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    This was so adorable. You did an amazing job at really defining each characters personality and sticking to that. That Dr. Phil reference cracked me up, and technically Audrey did play the field...a little. Then she got Zach! She has her cake and ate it too. It progressed really nicely and lots of little key factors came in to play. I LOVED the water park scene where he drew on her arm. So adorable. Keep writing!
    December 30th, 2010 at 01:30am
  • marylove2013

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    The ending was amazing!!!! Couldn't have been better! I loved the whole story! I would totally read a sequel! You are an awesome writer!!!
    December 29th, 2010 at 09:12pm
  • iheartmusicx3

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    the ending was adorable. (:
    i absolutely LOVED your story, and would definitely read the sequel, if you write it! (which i hope you do)
    i'll also comment more when you write the sequel. i promise! hahaha.
    but anyways, this story was amazing. your such a great writer, hopefully you'll be writing a lot more on here, i can't wait to see what you come up with in the future! :D
    December 29th, 2010 at 08:13pm
  • DearCameronOfficial

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    I loved the ending. It was so cute ;)
    December 29th, 2010 at 08:03pm
  • trebleclefs

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    You honestly left me speechless. I absolutely love the story and would love to read the sequel if you do create one. You're an amazing writer. :)
    December 29th, 2010 at 06:59pm
  • Celeste13

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    my bad. i typed out a sentence but it didn't make sense so i cleared it but i forgot that part in :$
    ignore the "nothing along that story line happened."
    sorry :$
    December 29th, 2010 at 06:28pm
  • Celeste13

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    the story was AMAZING, don't get me wrong.

    the last thing you mentioned about Cameron was him telling a friend that Audrey cheated on him and the rumour spread across the school. nothing along that story line happened.
    maybe in the sequel you could include more Audrey&Zach/Cameron conflict or something like that.

    you're an amazing writer btw (:
    December 29th, 2010 at 06:16pm
  • Hey Its Ali!

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    Oh and i would totally go for a sequel. And definitely titled Beautiful Soul. That song was my jam for years. :)
    December 29th, 2010 at 05:51pm
  • Hey Its Ali!

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    Aww. So cute. I loved the ending and im so glad audrey and zach finally ended up together. Dumb zach finally realized his feelings. :)
    December 29th, 2010 at 05:49pm
  • Celeste13

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    cfjsdlfjgskdjgljs /dead.
    the ending was cute but what about cameron D:
    i would totally be up for a sequal.
    December 29th, 2010 at 04:52pm
  • Dallas Bryher

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    you need to make a sequel. I am demanding you. but we all love ya fer writing dis effing great story.
    December 29th, 2010 at 04:36pm
  • lolamonito

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    Wow. Your story was amazing. That's all I have left to say.

    Please let me know when you post a sequel.

    And I love the song beautiful soul (:
    December 29th, 2010 at 04:17pm