Hello :) I haven't commented in such a long time! I've been so busy with my own story and so many other things that I haven't had time to finish reading chapter 20. First of all, I'd just like to say that overall this story was kind of perfect. It was not only written beautifully, but it kept me, and everyone else, interested. Some stories that I read on here are all the same, and they start to get boring and monotonous. What I liked about your story is that it was different from everyone elses. Most people have the main guy mess up, and then the main girl run back into his arms. In yours, Audrey was resistant, and I loved it. Aside from the whole story, I really loved the last chapter. I could picture it as a movie (lol). Although I was kinda hoping Zach would suprise her at the recital or something, I could never think of a better way to end it than with the sock. Honestly, you are such a fantastic writer and when I'm writing, I kind of look up to you in a way. I would really LOVE to read more from you so I'm going to read the sequel now, so expect another comment. :)
i love the ending (: i'm so glad she ended up with Zach. I wanted that to happen all along! I'm going to go start reading beautiful soul now & p.s. you need to write more of the Alex Gaskarth fanfic perty please!
I was out of town so I JUST read your story the millisecond my phone worked with Internet just thought you should know that and that I legit LOVE it!!!!!! No joke LOVE I am happy her and Zach ended up together :) thanks for telling me about your sequel gonna read it now, and comment of course
This was so adorable. You did an amazing job at really defining each characters personality and sticking to that. That Dr. Phil reference cracked me up, and technically Audrey did play the field...a little. Then she got Zach! She has her cake and ate it too. It progressed really nicely and lots of little key factors came in to play. I LOVED the water park scene where he drew on her arm. So adorable. Keep writing!
the ending was adorable. (: i absolutely LOVED your story, and would definitely read the sequel, if you write it! (which i hope you do) i'll also comment more when you write the sequel. i promise! hahaha. but anyways, this story was amazing. your such a great writer, hopefully you'll be writing a lot more on here, i can't wait to see what you come up with in the future! :D
my bad. i typed out a sentence but it didn't make sense so i cleared it but i forgot that part in :$ ignore the "nothing along that story line happened." sorry :$
the last thing you mentioned about Cameron was him telling a friend that Audrey cheated on him and the rumour spread across the school. nothing along that story line happened. maybe in the sequel you could include more Audrey&Zach/Cameron conflict or something like that.