June 24th, 2012 at 01:18pm
Between You and Me - Comments
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The storyline is good, but your grammar and punctuation isn't that good. A lot of your sentences are extremely awkward too. Maybe you can get a beta reader to help you out! (:December 20th, 2010 at 07:43pm
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have i told you that devin oliver is just ihdjsdnlkasj?
love it so far! more to go will be great <3November 26th, 2010 at 02:49pm
and love your story <3