The Expectation to Never Expect - Comments

aww friend fight :(

That is so mean and terrible. Sweet of Hunter to invite her instead of Lily.

why do you this is terrible? it's really not! I have got addicted to Hunter's voice & I definitely need more rory;DD

Update soon, I have missed you!!

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Aww, Rory seemed quite eager XD

Loved this! I get so happy when you update, its like the hightlight of my day XDXD ehh lily is sounding more fishy to me. As a bestfriend she shouldn't get mad over such juvenile things especially if she knows her brother is in the hospital. She's completly selfish.

I like how this is truly in the past tense, since you always foreshadow what will happen. Like how you said I should have known then & there things would change. Kinda gives off the vibe that her & lily will be no more (more exciting the saddening frankly) anyways it makes wanna know what will happen next!

I like blake, he's funny yet sweet. A great brother, sucks that he has that terrible asthma though//:

I was just wondering how much of this chapter is real? Do you have a brother like blake? Or maybe same happened with u & ur bestfriend? Man the fact that ur basing this off on true events makes the story even more intersting.

I also like you character names. They're not like reduant names like ashley and hessica but also they're not super unique (AKA stupid) like storm or whatever lol they have a nice combo of both (a healthy combo)

I absolutely adore your writing abby!! Its the best((:

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Blake really irked me. Like really irked. Awesome update though!

i liked it. hahaha i love awkward situations. hahaha. update soon!

its ok if you hate me, i have been the worse reader hehe i have been AWOL from the face of earth i must say.

anyways, this is so good!! its even more interesting that its based of true events, im trying to imagine you going through this (kinda hard since i have zero idea how you look like hehe) & you're a vegetarian?! oh no, i cannot live without my chicken & burger whopper....!! thats cool though if you are though, more chicken for me!! ok im totally joking XD

i especially like your characters they are fresh & unique so you get a high five, a sticker & cookies or whatever you like for that XD there is nothing i hate more then same repetitive cliche characters...

This is completely different than MTTM (i say that in a good way lol) you got talent if you can write dark serious emotion but still be able to write this funny light story((: some people only manage to do one or the other.

lovin' it, update soon:D:D i would like to see more rory;D

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Lily's and the protagonist's(I can't remember if you've told us her name XD) conversation at the beginning was just like how I am with my friends XD!

hahahaha loved it. like beyond words. I think that's funny and totally cute all at the same time.

I LOL'd at the part with the McChicken and her saying she was a vegetarian. And I know how she feels being dissed for a guy. =/

Just caught up on all six chapters, and I absolutely adore this. Your writing is spectacular, I can't even describe how in love with it I am.

Also, I love how its so bitter about love, because that's kind of where I am in my life haha. It's nice to know someone can relate.

Once again, this was truly wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I really like this :D I've only read the first part so far, but It has me very intrigued!

I like this story. The cynicism of the girl is good. I like Rory. She'll open her heart up again. It usually happens. But yeah, I really like this.

I can't wait for more!

I like the realness of it. If i wasn't such an optomist i would have stopped believing in love years ago :D

Rory is such a cute name for a guy! waaaay more suited for a guy then a girl.
You create the loveliest characters<3
i cant wait for whats next:D

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I am thoroughly enjoying this. Please keep it up, it's pretty amazing. I really like it.

love it ! keep on writing !

Loved it! Can't wait for more!