Loved this! I get so happy when you update, its like the hightlight of my day XDXD ehh lily is sounding more fishy to me. As a bestfriend she shouldn't get mad over such juvenile things especially if she knows her brother is in the hospital. She's completly selfish.
I like how this is truly in the past tense, since you always foreshadow what will happen. Like how you said I should have known then & there things would change. Kinda gives off the vibe that her & lily will be no more (more exciting the saddening frankly) anyways it makes wanna know what will happen next!
I like blake, he's funny yet sweet. A great brother, sucks that he has that terrible asthma though//:
I was just wondering how much of this chapter is real? Do you have a brother like blake? Or maybe same happened with u & ur bestfriend? Man the fact that ur basing this off on true events makes the story even more intersting.
I also like you character names. They're not like reduant names like ashley and hessica but also they're not super unique (AKA stupid) like storm or whatever lol they have a nice combo of both (a healthy combo)
I absolutely adore your writing abby!! Its the best((:
its ok if you hate me, i have been the worse reader hehe i have been AWOL from the face of earth i must say.
anyways, this is so good!! its even more interesting that its based of true events, im trying to imagine you going through this (kinda hard since i have zero idea how you look like hehe) & you're a vegetarian?! oh no, i cannot live without my chicken & burger whopper....!! thats cool though if you are though, more chicken for me!! ok im totally joking XD
i especially like your characters they are fresh & unique so you get a high five, a sticker & cookies or whatever you like for that XD there is nothing i hate more then same repetitive cliche characters...
This is completely different than MTTM (i say that in a good way lol) you got talent if you can write dark serious emotion but still be able to write this funny light story((: some people only manage to do one or the other.
lovin' it, update soon:D:D i would like to see more rory;D