The Expectation to Never Expect - Comments

I like it ;

Definetly subscribing (:

I love the way you started it out, keep on going because it has alot of potential.

this is really interesting. i'm really excited to see where this will go! i'm waiting baby! lol.

I feel like I'm the narrator, it's so insightful, but I really can't wait to read more when everything kicks off.

Honesty. Here it comes...

I think this might be going too slow. The first three chapters have all been information and nothing has actually happened. It's slow reading, but I love your stories so I keep reading. I need something to happen!!

i really like the idea of this story so far and the main character. its really different from your mafia story and i loveee it. cant wait to see it unfold moree :)

in all honesty, i am confused out of my mind. but i really wanna see where you take this & im fine with this pace but right now it feels like a prologue... all these chapters are leading up to the actually story plot. dont get me wrong im really liking this, im loving her personality & character & i think ur gonna make this goood!!

update soon(:

-thank you&come again.

Ok, so these were like weird intro type chapters or however you want to desribe them? That makes more sense. Kinda get a look into the cynic she is. I'm OK with any pace you go- it is your story after all. I'm looking forward to watching it take off and having the characters wrap me up- your good at that. Looking forward to the next update!

i like this so far. i like her spunk :) cant wait to read moreee

Oh I feel so sorry for her!!! My heart is breaking for her so much as I can relate to her as well!

Another great chapter! I agree with purplebull's comment, I also think this is a very good start. It gives me a good background info on the character and how her love life completely sucks. I like it, I can't help but wonder what is going to happen next, who is she going to meet, how will her situation change? Thanks for the update again! :D

My heart aches for this girl. Boys are dicks. I give her props for speaking her mind and walking away with dignity- even with a broken heart. I don't know many girls who can do that. I don't know what direction this is going yet but I like it so far.

it doesn't seem picked up though, these past 2 chapters all seem like one prologue that will start something you know? like a beginning or a summary but it again, it got me hooked bcus i dont know exactly where it will lead, her break up seems like ending but you have to write a story of off of something so im eager to see where you to take this. & plot maybe be different & such but the same descriptive brilliance is still there(;

update soon!!

-thank you&come again.

I can't wait to read more!!

Oh gosh! I don't know. I really like the writing and the content...but you know me- I am a HAPPY reader. I can get through dark times if I know theres a light at the end of the tunnel. (Doesn't have to mean boy and girl live happily ever after though thats always a favorite- but rather characters are content and not heart broken.) I'm very wary based on this first chapter. If it's like purplebull said, then I know the ending is gloomy and even though I'm going to enjoy the rollercoaster ride of the story, the end is going to cut off the track and my coaster is going to fly off and I'll die. If this is the beginning and we have to mend this belief, I'm still hesitant because cynics are very difficult. But I'm gonna take a leap of faith and press subscribe. I've dealt with harsh ending before but if the rides worth it, then so is the end.

im SO happy you posted this!!!! it gonna be AMAZING, i can already tell. I'm so anxious to know their story, will the chapters go back from here? if so i can tell the ending isnt a fairytale one lol

as SuperVic123^^ said this is a great hook especially since your gifted i know its gonna be spectacular...!!

The excitement was well worth it:D

update soon!!

-thank you&come again.

Yay first comment! Well I think it is going to be very interesting. Good hook! Its going to keep me wondering about what it is about.
As always your stories are great, and i cant wait for updates :D