Holy shit, this is your first slash? I'm so jealous. x3 You definitely have a lot of talent.<3 Halfway through reading this, do you know what I thought? I thought, "This is amazing." It's not full of super slashy stuff, and it's definitely something that's realistic (minus Zack Merrick running around and kissing boys. xD I wish. :p). I also love the way you incorporated the character's feelings. It really gives you butterflies. :3 And I agree with love.me.hate.me, if you make this into a full length story, I would love you for forever. x3 I loved this so much. Well done, and good luck!
this is your first slash?
I'm so jealous. x3
You definitely have a lot of talent.<3
Halfway through reading this,
do you know what I thought?
I thought,
"This is amazing."
It's not full of super slashy stuff,
and it's definitely something that's realistic (minus Zack Merrick running around and kissing boys. xD I wish. :p). I also love the way you incorporated the character's feelings. It really gives you butterflies. :3
And I agree with love.me.hate.me,
if you make this into a full length story,
I would love you for forever. x3
I loved this so much.
Well done, and good luck!
xo,
Kristen