Living a Dream - Comments

@ RipssaRadke
Thanks!

@ Flood
Thank you! glad you like the story :)

I like it the characters seem so real and not fake like other stories (:

I forgot about this story, it's a nice one though

I love this fanfic. The characters feel so real. Some of the thoughts and feelings are close to some of the ones I've dealt with. The writing is good, it's believable, and it is different than a lot of the other ones. Come to think of it I haven’t read an Oli Sykes one in a while

I hate to admit it, but I was a little hesitant to read this fic, mainly due to the, for lack of a better term, obnoxious disclaimer. I don't meant to be rude, but threatening to "beak" every bone in someone's body could definitely get this story reported.

Moving on to the actual content of the story, I did enjoy the premise and concept behind this fic, and I thought you did a great job with the opening chapter, especially with the way that you chose to close it at the end. That being said, I did notice quite a few grammatical errors in this first chapter that really detracted from my reading of the piece, but it's nothing so major that a good beta couldn't help you out with.

Overall, I feel like this story has great potential, and I could tell you put a lot of time and effort into this story, so I wish you nothing but the best as you continue to work on it :)

I love thisss !!

Wow! I really like this! Your writing style is really nice, everything flows so well! I loved the inclusion of two of my favourite bands in this story and I can't wait to see how her band progresses! Irish them luck ;) I'm in full support of your decision to slow things down, it's easy to get carried away sometimes! Xx

I think slowing things down was a good idea.
Good luck to her and her band.. i wonder if they'll get anywhere..
Nice update (:

can't wait to read more. (:

i need to read more of this. please and thank you.

HA! Amanda's a bitch.

Update soon Please!! I wanna know what happens :O

I love this story lots :)

D: NOOOOOO I want things to get better!!

i love, love, love this. :)

I love the new layout ! :)
and god, Amanda, what a beyotch.

This is so good!
I can't wait for more :]

D: NO. I DON'T LIKE CRYING.

:D I really, really like this!!